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Analysis of the bar chart Following is my answer to IELTS English test. It is test which I have to analyze a bar chart or graph and write a report but I can't show you a bar chart. Please correct my report as regards English grammar. This bar chatr compares the percentage of who is living in urban areas in 6 areas of the world. In 1950, North America is the highest percentage in 6 areas, followed by Oceania. More than half of population in North America lived in urban areas. The lowest percentage is Africa, with 15% living in urban areas. Similarly Asia is low percentage with 17%. When it comes to 2007, the highest percentage is North America and the lowest is Africa following Asia as before.However the percentage of Africa and Asia increased by twice as large as percentages in 1950. In 2050, though North America, Latin America and Europe are relatively high percentage, the rate of increase of them is not large. In contrast the percentage of Africa and Asia increased by more than one third as large as in 2007. To sum up, America and Europe is relatively high percentage from 1950 to 2007. On the other hand, Although Africa and Asia is low percentage compared with the others, the rate of increase is larger than them.

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Analysis of the bar chart 

The following is my answer to the IELTS English test. This It is test requires me which I have to analyze a bar chart or graph and write a report, but I can't show you a bar chart. Please correct my report as regards English grammar. 

This bar chart compares the percentage of individuals who is living in urban areas in 6 areas of the world. 
In 1950, North America is had the highest percentage in 6 areas, followed by Oceania. More than half of the population in North America lived in urban areas. The area with the lowest percentage is was Africa with 15% living in urban areas. Similarly Asia is had a low percentage with 17%. 
When it comes to In 2007, the highest percentage is was in  North America. The lowest is was in Africa followed by Asia as before in the previous example. However the percentage number of individuals in urban areas in of Africa and compared to Asia increased by twice as large doubled as a percentages in 2007 compared to 1950. 
By In 2050, though although North America, Latin America and Europe are will have relatively high percentage percentages, the rate of increase of them is not large. In contrast the percentage percentages of in Africa and Asia increased will increase by more than one third as large as in 2007. 
To sum up, In summary, America and Europe is had relatively high percentage percentages from 1950 to 2007. On the other hand, although the percentage rates in  Africa and Asia  is were low percentage compared with the others, the rate of increase is larger than them.

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