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Could someone correct this text for me? I playing in a metalcore band and we're recording right know and I forget to let someone slide through the text. WHITEOUT – SELL DOWN THE RIVER Strophe I refuse to close my eyes I have enough of your fucking lies After all we’ve been through May heaven forgive you You have the charm of a snake Now you’re digging your own grave You cut your own throat With the lies you’ve told Refrain I’ve gone through hell and high water but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter I’ve gone through hell and high water but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter Strophe Memories pressed between the pages You carry more than a thousand faces You’ve sold your soul To fill your pockets with gold The truth left unspoken You left me drowning in the open You’re getting closer to death With ervery single breath Refrain I’ve gone through hell and high water but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter I’ve gone through hell and high water but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter Bridge A night you will never forget Get down on your knees and pray Breakdown Refrain I’ve gone through hell and high water but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter I’ve gone through hell and high water but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter Refrain I’ve gone through hell and high water but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter I’ve gone through hell and high water but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter

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Wow! Your song is very nicely done! I'd love to hear the song. :)

Other than what Brian T corrected, there's nothing more to add. However, if you're interested, I made some edits in your intro. :)


Could someone correct this text for me?

I am playing in a metalcore band and we're recording right know. and I forget forgot to let someone slide through review the text.

WHITEOUT – SELL DOWN THE RIVER

Strophe
I refuse to close my eyes
I have enough of your fucking lies
After all we’ve been through
May heaven forgive you
You have the charm of a snake
Now you’re digging your own grave
You cut your own throat
With the lies you’ve told

Refrain
I’ve gone through hell and high water
but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter
I’ve gone through hell and high water
but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter

Strophe
Memories pressed between the pages
You carry more than a thousand faces
You’ve sold your soul
To fill your pockets with gold
The truth left unspoken
You left me drowning in the open
You’re getting closer to death
With ervery single breath

Refrain
I’ve gone through hell and high water
but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter
I’ve gone through hell and high water
but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter

Bridge
A night you will never forget
Get down on your knees and pray

Breakdown

Refrain
I’ve gone through hell and high water
but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter
I’ve gone through hell and high water
but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter

Refrain
I’ve gone through hell and high water
but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter
I’ve gone through hell and high water
but you served me like a lamb to the slaughter
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Sehr gut! Ich hab nur einen Fehler gefunden...


Strophe 1
I refuse to close my eyes
I have I've had enough of your fucking lies
After all we’ve been through
May heaven forgive you
You have the charm of a snake
Now you’re digging your own grave
You cut your own throat
With the lies you’ve told
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Wow! Very nicely done. I'd love to hear the song! :)

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