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Talking about my interview. Yesterday I go to an interview at Zhangjiang. That's far away to my home. I am taken 2 hours by subways and bus. But, That's a beautiful place and in a beautiful building. I went down there and fill some forms and then a with glasses guy interview to me. he's age looks like as me, but more like the programmer than me :). OK, I thought to go get him, ahh, I really did this. he asks me questions I answer as well. But,in the end, he says he didn't offer me my salary request. he wants me to lower my salary expectation. "that's impossible." I answer him. and then I leave that building. I am very angry because if you didn't accept my salary request, why you that invite me to come to the interview? Because I specify the salary on my resume.

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Talking about my interview.

Yesterday I go to an interview at Zhangjiang.
That's far away to my home. I am taken 2 hours by subways and bus. 
But, That's a beautiful place and in a beautiful building. 

I went down there and fill some forms and then a with glasses guy interview to me.
he's age looks like as me, but more like the programmer than me :).
OK, I thought to go get him, ahh, I really did this. he asks me questions I answer as well.
But,in the end, he says he didn't offer me my salary request. 
he wants me to lower my salary expectation. "that's impossible." 
I answer him. and then I leave that building. 
I am very angry because if you didn't accept my salary request, why you that invite me to come to the interview? 
Because I specify the salary on my resume.


Talking about my interview.

Yesterday I went to an interview at Zhangjiang.

That's far away from my home. It took me 2 hours by subways and bus. 
But,It's a beautiful place and    a beautiful building. 

I went down there and fill some forms and then a guy with glasses interviewed me.
He looks like in the same age as me, but more like a programmer than me :). 
So, I thought to go get him, ahh, I really did this. he asked me questions I answer as well. 
But,in the end, he says he can't offer me my salary request. 
he wants me to lower my salary expectation. "that's impossible." 
I answered him. and then I  left the building. 
I am very angry because if they can't accept my salary request, why did they invite me to come to the interview? 
Because I specified the salary on my resume

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Talking about my interview. ('full stop' should not be used here)

Yesterday had an interview in Zhangjiang.
That's far away from my home.It takes  2 hours by subways or bus Going there.
But, That's a beautiful place and in a beautiful building.
I climbed down some stairs and fill some forms, then a with glasses guy interviewed me.
He was the same age as me, but more like the programmers than me :).
OK, I thought to go get him, ahh, I really did this. He asked me questions and I answer as well.
But,at the end, he said that wouldn't  offer me my salary request.
The amount of money which he offered to be paid to me as salary was lower than what I was expecting.
I told him about it and he left the room. 
I was too angry of their treatments towards me about it as I had announced my will about the some of salary that I was Expecting they pay me.
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I am Chinese as well but I'd like a try. 

First of all, the tense. Could you write all these in the past tense, such as "I went to an interview"?

Secondly:


Talking about my interview.

Yesterday I go to an interview at Zhangjiang.
That's far away to my home. I am taken 2 hours by subways and bus.  It took me 2 hours 
But, That's a beautiful place and in a beautiful building.
I went down there and fill some forms and then a with glasses guy interview to me.
he's age looks like as me, but more like the programmer than me :).  He's about the same age as me
OK, I thought to go get him, ahh, I really did this. he asks me questions I answer as well.
But,in the end, he says he didn't offer me my salary request.  
he wants me to lower my salary expectation. "that's impossible."
I answer him. and then I leave that building.
I am very angry because if you didn't accept my salary request, why you that invite me to come to the interview?
Because I specify the salary on my resume.

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