A little about my hobbies.

I am a girl who has many hobbies.

My likes about my hobbies have not changed much since I was a child. Among the main things I like are sports, my favorite is football, I love to watch and play, so my team is Real Madrid of Spain. (Among many things I like sports. My favorite is soccer. I love.....)

On the other hand I love video games, my favorite is Skyrim and Warcraft. I enjoy a lot while playing.

Also like most of the girls I like makeup and cooking, these two things I would like to develop professionally. In addition I studied Graphic Design and loved it, now I can create many wonderful things. Of course I can not ignore my passion for teaching Spanish, it is something that makes me very happy and I feel satisfaction when my students advance.

Thanks for reading me! (thanks for reading)
Greetings.

Great job, you have sentences that need a period instead of a comma, but great job

A little about my hobbies.

I am a girl who has many hobbies.

My likes about my hobbies have not changed much since I was a child. Among the main things I like are sports. My favorite is football and I love to watch and play, so my team is Real Madrid of Spain.

On the other hand I love video games. My favorite is Skyrim and Warcraft. I enjoy playing them a lot.

Also, like most girls, I like makeup and cooking. These I would like to develop professionally. In addition, I studied Graphic Design and loved it and now I can create many wonderful things. Of course I cannot ignore my passion for teaching Spanish, it is something that makes me very happy and I feel satisfaction when my students advance.

Thanks for reading me!
Greetings.

Very well written.