I need write a redaction about me, but I think that I write with a lots error
Mi name is Cristina, I’m a girl Spanish, I live in Seville, I am superior technique in project and construction management decoration and actually I estudy inside design, I love the world of decoration, reform and related, the art and craft too. I am student so I prefer to be helper in summer holidays, I love the nature, field, mountain and the beach. I love to do trekking for this places. My passion is the animals, now I have birds and guinea pigs. My main problem is that my english is bad, and this is the most impels me to live this experience, in mi city I study english in academy but I think that learn y practise with people native and know english good every day and direct is more interesting.
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I need write a redaction about me, but I think that I write with a lots error
Mi name is Cristina, I’m a Spanish girl, I live in Seville, I am a superior technique in project and construction management decoration and actually I am estudying inside design, I love the world of decoration, reform and related, the art and craft too. I am a student so I prefer to be helper in summer holidays, I love the nature, field,(¿campo?=countryside) mountain and beach. I love to do trekking for this these places. My passion is are the animals, now I have birds and guinea pigs. My main problem is that my english is bad, and this is the most impels me to live this experience, in my city I study english in an academy but I think that learning y practising with native people and know good and direct english every day is more interesting.actually means realmente
impels=impediments?
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I need write an essay about myself, but I think that I will write with many errors.
My name is Cristina, I’m a Spanish girl, I live in Seville, I am majoring in* project and construction management decoration(?) and currently I study interior design, I love the world of decoration, reform (redesign? upgrading?) and related, arts and crafts as well. I am a student so I prefer to (practice my craft/ do an internship) during the summer holidays, I love the nature, fields, mountains and the beaches. I love to trek through these places. My passion is animals, at the moment I have birds and guinea pigs. My main problem is that my English is bad, and this is what most impels me to go through this experience, in my city I study English in academy but I think that learning and practicing with native people and familiarizing myself with English every day in a more direct way will be more interesting.* I am guessing here, but it would make sense since you are a student.
Remember that we capitalize languages and that adjectives come before the nouns.
Your writing needs some work but that is a perfectly normal part of the learning process. You are doing great.Sigas escribiendo y aprendiendo y vencerás el inglés muy pronto.
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I need write a redaction about me, but I think that I write with lots of error
Mi name is Cristina, I’m a girl Spanish girl, I live in Seville, I am superior technique in project and construction management decoration [this needs clarification - but I am not sure what you are trying to say, so I am not sure how to correct it] and actually I estudy study inside [do you mean to use "interior design"?] design,. I love the world of decoration, reform [do you mean "form"?] and related, the art and craft too. I am student so I prefer to be a helper in on summer holidays,. I love the nature, fields, mountains, and the beach. I love to do trekking for this to these places. My passion is the animals, right now I have birds and guinea pigs. My main problem is that my English is bad, and this is the most impels me the most to live this experience,. In mi my city I study English in at the academy but I think that learning y and practising with native people native and who know English good well every day and direct [ I am not sure what you mean here] is more interesting.Want to progress faster?
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