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LIFE ON A DESERT ISLAND (article) Have you ever thought how you would live on a desert island? Who people could you find with or what things could you have there? If we lived on a desert in a period, you would value more all what we have. Firstly, in a desert there is not electricity, water and other many things which we use every day, therefore, we would have to survive hoy we could. For example, we could not sleep in a bed, so we should build one ourselves with natural materials which we find. Other aspect to consider is the food, we should look for our own food because on a desert there is not any supermarket to be able to buy. Moreover it is said that you could even die of thrist if you did not find water, because of a desert is extremely dry. As far as I am concerned, I could not live without internet because Iwould be absolutely incommunicated and I could not be informed of all what happended in the world and to my friends or family. In conclusion, to live on a desert, firsly you would have to prepare physically and psicologically. When you have already done it, you should ask yourself: Am I ready?

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LIFE ON A DESERT ISLAND (article)

Have you ever thought about how you would live on a desert island? Which people would you find take with you or what things would you want to have there? If we lived on a desert in a period, you we would value more all that we have.
Firstly, in a desert there is not electricity, water and other many things which we use every day, therefore, we would have to survive however we could. For example, we could not sleep in a bed, so we would have to build one ourselves with natural materials which we found.
Another aspect to consider is the food. We would have to look for our own food because in a desert there is not any are no supermarkets to be able to buy. Moreover it is said that you could even die of thirst if you did not find water, because of a desert is extremely dry.
As far as I am concerned, I could not live without internet because I would be absolutely incommunicated cut off (or: incommunicado) and I would not be informed of all about what is happening in the world and to my friends or family.
In conclusion, to live on a desert, firstly you would first have to prepare yourself physically and psychologically. When you have already done that, you should ask yourself: Am I ready?

 

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Well written, your sentences have a pleasant, natural syntax.

- English uses very often the Spanish loan-word "incommunicado" (except with 2 "m"s, and always with "o" at the end), it has the same meaning as the Spanish adjective "incomunicado/a".

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