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My advice Dear Sam, I am happy because you write to me a letter. I am writing to you because I would like to give you an advice. Next month , You are moving with your family to a different area You have to choose between going to a small school in the countryside or a large school in the centre of town. In my opinion is better a large school in the centre of town because there are more opportunity. You would have a lot of friends and enjoy with them in the park, camp football ... At the weekend you could be able to go to cinema with your family and after go to dinner. I hope helping you with my advice and seing you soon. My best wishes. Your best Friends Maria.

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My advice

Dear Sam,

I am happy because you wrote me a letter.

I am writing to you because I would like to give you advice.

Next month , You are moving with your family to a different area. 

You have to choose between going to a small school in the countryside or a large school in the centre of town.

In my opinion, a large school in the centre of town is better because there is more opportunity.

You would have a lot of friends and enjoy with them in the park, and camp football ...

During the weekend, you would be able to go to the cinema with your family after dinner.

I hope my advice helped and I'll see you soon.

My best wishes.

Your Best Friend Maria

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My advice

Dear Sam,

I am happy because you write to me a letter that you have written to me.

I am writing to you because I would like to give you an some advice.

Next month you are moving with your family to a different area and you have to choose between going to a small school in the countryside or to a large school in the centre of town.

In my opinion it would be is better to go to a large school in the centre of town because there are more opportunityopportunities.

You would have make a lot of friends and enjoy spending time with them in the park, camp football playing football

At the weekend you would be able to go to cinema with your family and afterwards go out to dinner.

I hope helping you with my advice and seing you soon. I hope my advice is helpful and I look forward to seeing you soon.

My best wishes. Best wishes

Your best Friends Maria.

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