Foreigner
This afternoon I went to the gym to work out. After I had been kicking a sandbag for fifteen minutes, I saw a foreigner came in. I don't know which country where he come from, but he is a white man. I wanted to talk to him in order to improve my oral English. But when I though of my poor English I was hesitant . If I got tongue-tied, how embarrassing situation would be! So I just went back continued my kicking.
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Foreigner
This afternoon I went to the gym to work out. After I had been kicking a sandbag for fifteen minutes, I saw a foreigner come in. I don't know which country where he came from, but he is (was) a white man. I wanted to talk to him in order to improve my oral English. But when I though of my poor English I was hesitant . If I got tongue-tied, how embarrassing would the situation would be! So I just went back and continued my kicking.Notes:
Best not to start a sentence with 'But'. Perfectly understandable though.
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