describe a perfect student
Who can be called "a perfect student" is a toss-up. However, somehow I have a clear and distinct image of him or her. Oddly enough, I wouldn't say that a perfect student is inevitably A-student who endeavours to do painstakingly all his homework. It is full consciousness that is more significant for a perfect student that eventully will be able to lead to success. Such qualities as being resourceful, inquisitive and active drastically help both teachers and students. I deem the process of studying itself must engulf students. They must crave for tackling problems in different school subjects, be engrossed in intangible mysteries of our world. As for teachers, they mustn't deaden students' curiousity or stamp fresh and even some revolutionary ideas that seem to break our customary system of knowledge and views of life. So I bet that only such a teacher motivates students to be perfect, to be original and students in turn must also inspire their teacher to remain enthusiastic because of their feedback.
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describe a perfect student
Who can be called "a perfect student" is a toss-up. However, somehow I have a clear and distinct image of him or her. Oddly enough, I wouldn't say that a perfect student is invariably an A-student who endeavours to do painstakingly all his homework. (It is (a?) full consciousness that is more significant for a perfect student that eventully will be able to lead to success.?). Such qualities as being resourceful, inquisitive and active drastically help both teachers and students. I say the process of studying itself must engulf students. They must crave for tackling problems in different school subjects and be engrossed in intangible mysteries of our world. As for teachers, they mustn't deaden students' curiousity (or stamp fresh and even some revolutionary ideas that seem to break our customary system of knowledge and views of life)*. So I bet that only such a teacher motivates students to be perfect, to be original and students in turn must also inspire their teacher to remain enthusiastic because of their feedback.*They must or mustn't do this?
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Describe a perfect student
It is a toss up over who can be called "a perfect student". However, somehow I have a clear and distinct image of him or her. Oddly enough, I wouldn't say that a perfect student is inevitably an A-student who endeavours to do all his homework painstakingly. It is full consciousness that is more significant for a perfect student that eventually will be able to lead to success.Such qualities as being resourceful, inquisitive and active drastically help both teachers and students. I deem the process of studying itself must engulf students. They must crave for tackling problems in different school subjects and be engrossed in the intangible mysteries of our world.
As for teachers, they mustn't deaden students' curiosity or stamp out fresh and even some revolutionary ideas that seem to break our customary system of knowledge and views of life. So I bet that only such a teacher motivates students to be perfect, to be original and students in turn must also inspire their teacher to remain enthusiastic because with their feedback.
Hello Emily,
Nice text about ideal students and I must admit that I do agree with you. A class full of eager students who want the knowledge and want to use this knowledge is a definite plus when you are teaching. I don't think there is any point in learning something for the sake of learning it. I don't know how many students that have told me that they studied grammar and writing but never actually communicated in the language they were learning. Fortunately technology has made communication even easier but students very often have top find their own way.
Your text is a very high standard with just a few small mistakes, the only thing I would suggest is that you break texts up into paragraphs.
Best wishes
Bob
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thank you! but I've noticed one mistake :D I suppose "stamp fresh and even some revolutionary ideas out"
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Nice views
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