My holy week
In my holidays during holy week I utilice this time and I studied a lot, but not all was studies. Also, I went with my boyfriend and some friend to Seville to watc "pasos2 and some church. We ate in a Restaurant that It was too expensive. We asked why the food were to expensive if other time that we were went the price was normal. The waiter answed us that It was Holy week and in Seville had a lot of tourists with money. So, I adviced you, If you will go to Seville in Holy Week your must take your food or get ready for spend a lot of money.
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My holy week
During the holidays I used my free time well and studied a lot, but I didn't just study. One day, i went out with my boyfriend and some friends to Seville to watch "pasos2. We ate in a restaurant but it was too expensive. We asked why the food was so expensive when any other time it's at a normal price. The waiter told us that because it was holy week there were a lot of tourists so the food was more expensive. The waiter advised us that if you want to go to Seville during holy week, you have to either take your own food or be prepared to spend a lot of money.*This was good I understood what you wrote. The main changes I made to what you wrote were just to make it sound more like how we would say it in English. Be careful with was/were. Use was if your talking about something in the singular and were if it's in the plural. Also, don't capitalize words beginning with the letter I. The only I in a sentence that should be capitalized is if you are talking about yourself e.g. I like this, I think that.
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