My firts registrer
Hello, my name is Hudson.
I'm from Indaiatuba Brazil, i have 27 years old and work with Java developement.
I'm married with the Gisele, she is physioterapist.
I have one son, he have six months and it is my life.
I have a dream of living in USA.
If you can correct my text i thank.
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My first registrer
Hello, my name is Hudson.I'm from Indaiatuba, Brazil,. i I have 27 years old and work with Java developement.
I'm married with the Gisele, she is a physioterapist.
I have one a son, he have is six months and it he is my life.
I have a dream of My dream is living in the USA.
If you can correct my text i thank.
bye
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Hi Hudson! Giulia's post isn't entirely correct so I will correct your text for you - I am a native English speaker.
My firts registrer My first post
Hello, my name is Hudson.I'm from Indaiatuba Brazil, I am have 27 years old and work with Java developement. development.
I'm married with the to Gisele and she is a physioterapist. physiotherapist.
I have one son who is he have six months old and it he is my life.
I have a dream of living in the USA.
If you can correct my text I will be very grateful. thank.
bye All the best
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My firts first registrer post.
Hello, my name is Hudson.I'm from Indaiatuba, Brazil. I have am 27 years old and work with Java development.
I'm married with the to a woman named Gisele. She is physiotherapist.
I have one son, he have is six months old and it he is my life.
I have a dream of living in the USA.
If you can correct my text i thank I would appreciate it.
bye
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Good job overall! Just be careful to capitalize your "I"'s and don't forget that we use "to be" when we talk about our age.
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