Please, correct these sentences)
1. There was the SHORTAGE of products in the store, however there was the VARIETY of them in another one.
2. It is a hot day today. Ton left home with FLESH-COLORED skin, but he came back with SUNBURNT skin.
3. Ann and Ton FOSTER their kids rightly. So their children will grow up KIND-HEARTED and THANKFUL.
4. I didn't beleive in what happened, so I PINCHED myself to be sure that it was not a dream.
5. An artist used a full PALETTE on his canvas, even the BACKGROUND was colorful like a rainbow.
6. Tom is OVERLY rude with the girls, nonetheless he POSSESSES a MAGNETIC properties, so the women continue to desire his attention.
7. This RUSTY piece of iron is very precious actually, because it is a museum EXHIBIT.
8. You have a blood pressure already. Your ACCOUNTABILITY will kill you soon, SIMILARLY a gigantic CARGO of a ship pulls the ship to the bottom. Relax, don't carry the world upon your shoulders.
9. Tom is well-off. -How do you know it? - His WELL-BEING is proved that he has a GRAND mansion with the GREENHOUSE in it.
10. Ann is an unconscionable person.
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Please, correct these sentences)
1. There was the a SHORTAGE of products in the store, however there was the a VARIETY of them in another one.(The first store has a shortage of products/stock, but the second had a wide variety to choose from.)
2. It is a hot day today. Ton(Tom) left home with FLESH-COLOURED skin, but he came back with SUNBURNT skin.(... but he spent tooo much time in the sun and got sunburnt.)
3. Ann and Ton FOSTER their kids rightly.(correctly/with kindness) So their children will grow up KIND-HEARTED and THANKFUL.
4. I didn't beleive believe in what happened, so I PINCHED myself to be sure that it was not a dream.
5. An artist useds a full PALETTE on his canvas, even the BACKGROUND was colourful like a rainbow.(either "An artist uses..." or "The artist used ..." or "The artist is using ...")
6. Tom is OVERLY rude with the girls, nonetheless he POSSESSES a MAGNETIC properties(personality), so the women continue to desire his attention.
7. This RUSTY piece of iron is very precious actually, because it is a museum EXHIBIT.
8. You have a (high) blood pressure already. Your ACCOUNTABILITY will kill you soon, SIMILARLY a gigantic CARGO of a ship pulls the ship to the bottom. Relax, don't carry the world upon your shoulders. (not a good use of "similarly". "The lorry is low on it's suspension because of the load, similarly a cargo ship is lower in the water when it is full.)
9. Tom is well-off. -How do you know it? - His WELL-BEING is proved that he has a GRAND mansion with the GREENHOUSE in it. (Well-being is usually connected with health. A mansion is an indication of wealth.)
10. Ann is an unconscionable person.
I hope that my comments help, but if you have any questions, just ask.
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1 A variety not the variety
2. Correct
3. Foster is not correct.Raise their kids correctly.
4. I don't believe what happened. You don't need "in".
6. No "a". He possesses magnetic properties
8. Second sentence is not correct. The word accountability is not used correctly and makes no sense with the second part of the sentence.
9. Well-being is like health. Not related to money. The proof of his wealth is that he had a grand mansion. The greenhouse is with the mansion not in it.
10. I think unconscionable is a spelling mistake? Or perhaps you mean she has no conscience?
I hope this helps. Great effort
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