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A new baby I was told that my sister was going to give birth soon. To be honest, I was a bit shocked when I heard this news. The first thought that came to my mind was how to help her. Despite the fact that she was not due for another 3 months I decided to find some necessary stuff that could help her to save some money. I brought her a crib, a mattress and 4 bumper pads. It just needed to be assembled and the good crib was ready to use. I also brought her car seats for infants and toddlers. Those helped her to save pretty much money. That was not too easy to get my friends to give all their baby stuff to me but they agreed to part with all their equipment. They gave me a baby monitor, a video monitor, a changing table, not to mention a big pack of diapers. The first minute, when I was giving all this to my sister, she didn't want to take saying that she didn't have a baby room set up yet, but I convinced her since there's no time like the present. My friends were happy to part with all their stuff because it really helped them to free up space in their appartments, garages, etc. As for me, I was happy that I could kill two birds with one stone (helped my sister to save money and helped my friends to free up some space).

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A new baby

I was told that my sister was going to give birth soon. To be honest, I was a bit shocked when I heard this news. The first thought that came to my mind was how to help her. Despite the fact that she was not due for another 3 months I decided to find some necessary stuff that could help her to save some money. I brought her a crib, a mattress and 4 bumper pads. It just needed to be assembled and the good crib (Saying 'the good crib' is technically correct it sounds a bit odd in English. Saying 'the crib' is more natural sounding) was ready to use. I also brought her car seats for infants and toddlers. Those helped her to save pretty much money. That It was not too easy to get my friends to give all their baby stuff to me but they agreed to part with all of their equipment. They gave me a baby monitor, a video monitor, a changing table, not to mention a big pack of diapers. The At first minute, when I was giving all this to my sister, she didn't want to take it, saying that she didn't have a baby room set up yet, but I convinced her since there's no time like the present. My friends were happy to part with all of their stuff because it really helped them to free up space in their appartments, garages, etc. As for me, I was happy that I could kill two birds with one stone (I helped my sister to save money and helped my friends to free up some space).


Very good post! Your English is very good.

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That's really nice from you! stay well , and your sis:)

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