Please correct these sentences)

1. Ann wanted to change the subject and suddenly began to describe her new fancy boots, but Tom said, "That is irrelevant to our subject!".
2. There was a very strong blizzard, and everything was blurry from our window.
3. There was a dramatic performance. The audience was mesmerized.
4. The leader of the tribe governed badly, so the tribe required a new leader who would be well-suited.
5. This mechanism enables to continue our work with a flat battery.
6. Ann's toddler tramps (or 'is tramping' ) confidently.
7. Tom clenched his fists, because he heard somebody sneaking up to him (or, 'because he heard someone sneak up to him.') 
8. Ann yearned for a couple of chocolate bars, but she controlled herself, so she set the sweets in the nook in order to take and eat them later.
9. Tom likes his jacket of worn flannel fabric.
10. Tom's palms are always sweaty, maybe there is a malfunction in his sweat glands.  

Please correct these sentences)

1. Ann wanted to change the subject and suddenly began to describe her new fancy boots, but Tom said, "That is irrelevant (to our subject!)**.
2. There was a very strong blizzard and everything was a blur from our window.
3. It was a dramatic performance. The audience was mesmerized.
4. The leader of the tribe governed too badly, so the tribe required a new leader who would be better-suited.
5. This mechanism enables us to continue our work with a flat battery.
6. Ann's toddler tramps confidently.
7. Tom clenched his fists because he heard somebody sneaked to him. (also possible is 'sneaked up on him')
8. Ann yearned for a couple of chocolate bars, but she controlled herself, so she set some sweets in the nook in order to take and eat them later.
9. Tom likes his worn jacket of flannel (fabric)**.
10. Tom's palms are always sweaty. Maybe he is ill.

**(..) are optional.

Please correct these sentences)

1. Ann wanted to change the subject and suddenly began to describe her new fancy boots, but Tom said, "It is the item This is which is irrelevant to our subject discussion!".
2. There was a very strong blizzard, everything was blur hazy/blurry from our window.
3. There It was a dramatic performance. The audience was mesmerized.
4. The leader of the tribe governed overly badly, so the tribe required a new leader who would be well-suited.
5. This mechanism enables us to continue our work despite a with flat low battery.
6. Ann's toddler tromps walks confidently.
7. Tom clenched his fists, because he heard somebody sneaked  to him up.
8. Ann yearned earned  a couple of chocolate bars, but she could not controlled herself, so she set saved the sweets in the a nook in order to take and eat them later.
9. Tom likes his worn jacket made of flanel fabric.
10. Tom's palms are always sweaty always, maybe there is a malfunction in the work of his organism Perhaps there is a problem with his sweat glands.