Happiness
The main thing in life is happiness. Everybody has his own happiness. Happiness is when a flower planted by you blooms. Happiness is to see your friends around the table. Happiness is when you have somebody to love. Happiness is when you are loved. Its when you can do your favorite activity. You don’t need to wait for happiness – you must feel it.
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Happiness
The main thing in life is happiness. Everybody has his(their) own happiness. (For me )Happiness is when a flower planted by you blooms. Happiness is to see your friends around the table. Happiness is when you have somebody to love. Happiness is when you are loved. Its when you can do your favourite activity. You don’t need to wait for happiness – you must feel it.
1 - although it is common to use "his" for "everybody" - I prefer to use "their" which is gender unspecific. I certainly wouldn't want to insult any women!
2 - After saying that happiness is not the same for everybody, in most sentences, you have written "happiness is ...", which is fine if you had included something to indicate these were what makes you happy. [For me ..] If these were intended as examples, then use "Happiness could be .."
3 - It is useful to know the difference between English and American - "favourite"/"favorite".
It seems to me that we have to find happiness wherever we can and make the most of it.
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Happiness
The main thing in life is happiness. Everybody has his Their own happiness. Happiness is when a flower planted by you blooms. Happiness is to see your friends around the table. Happiness is when you have somebody to love. Happiness is when you are loved. It's when you can do your favorite activity. You don’t need to wait for happiness – you must feel it.It is good but in my opinion it could be developed by being more complicated.
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Well said, and yet it can be elusive; such a simple wish, but sometimes hard to find. We may deny ourselves without even being aware. What tragedy !
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Happiness
The main thing in life is happiness. Everybody has his own happiness. Happiness is when a flower planted by you blooms. Happiness is to see your friends around the table. Happiness is when you have somebody to love. Happiness is when you are loved. Its when you can do your favorite activity. You don’t need to wait for happiness – you must feel it.It is good but you could use more complicated sentences to it implys stronger feelings.
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