Amazing City

Hey , guys ! Does so time I don’t that write here . Today I want to tell about my public holiday . I was in Rio de Janeiro on public holiday and I enjoyed it so much , there have beautiful beaches , beautiful people , Cristo Redentor and Pão de Açúcar beautiful landscape … Really I loved it ! I just don’t like so much of weather , it’s good , but so hot there . I wanted to tell more about it , but is late a bit here so maybe I tell more about it after . I am writing a bit for improve my English . I am studying the English language since January , so I hope get results good .
Have a nice day ! 
Sorry if I made many mistakes , but I hope that not .
So please ,correct me .

Hey guys! It's been a while since I last wrote here. Today I want to tell you about my public holiday. I was in Rio de Janero(don't need to repeat where)and I enjoyed it so much. There are beautiful beaches, beautiful people, Cristo Redentor and Pão de Açúcar beautiful landscape. Really loved it! I just don't like the weather much, it's not bad, but it' so hot. I want to say more but it's late now so maybe I'll write more later. I am writing a bit of text to improve my English. I have been studying the English language since January so I hope the results are good.

Have a nice day too!

Don't be sorry for your mistakes, you English is quite good!

Amazing City

Hey , guys ! It has been some time since I wrote here . Today I want to tell about my public holiday . I was in Rio de Janeiro on a public holiday and I enjoyed it so much. There were beautiful beaches , beautiful people , Cristo Redentor and Pão de Açúcar and a beautiful landscape … I really I loved it ! I just don’t like too much the weather . It’s good , but so hot there . I wanted to tell more about it , but is a bit late here so maybe I will tell more about it after . I am writing a bit to improve my English . I am studying the English language since January , so I hope to get good results .
Have a nice day ! 
Sorry if I made many mistakes , but I hope not too many . It was well written with just a few small mistakes.
So please correct me .

Amazing City

Hey , guys ! Does so time I don’t that write here . Today I want to tell about my public holiday . I was in Rio de Janeiro on public holiday and I enjoyed it so much , there have beautiful beaches , beautiful people , Cristo Redentor and Pão de Açúcar beautiful landscape … Really I loved it ! I just don’t like so much of weather , it’s good , but so hot there . I wanted to tell more about it , but is late a bit here so maybe I tell more about it after . I am writing a bit for improve my English . I am studying the English language since January , so I hope get good results .
Have a nice day ! 
Sorry if I made many mistakes , but I hope that not .
So please ,correct me .