practice-Describe my room
My room is a small duplex apartment close to the street, so, the dust is large and not very quiet! The Shape of the room like a rectangle, narrow rectangle. My room is the narrow space. The downstairs is the kitchen and living room, when you into the room, you can see the shoe ark on your right and a small laundry room on your left. Walk forward ,, than you can see the kitchen on your left and the living room is in front of you,,, There is a icebox next to the kitchen behind the wall and the sofa is next door to the icebox.. Across from the sofa, there is an short cabinet under the wall. At the end of this room, there is a window on the wall. Next to the window, there is a mirror on the wall at the corner of the window and the stairs.
Climbing up the stairs, than you can see the upstairs is an private space. I usually used this place to sleeping and working or do some indoor sports, such as YOGO. There is a small desk in the centre of the room. On the desk, there are some books and a computer on it. Under the desk, there is a white drawer cabinet on bottom right. At the corner of this room, behind the desk, there is a bathroom in here. On the other side of this room, there is a bed under the window, and the bookcase next to it. The wardrobe is between the bookcase and the bathroom, next to a small Rocking chair,,,
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Practice-Describe My Room
My room is a small duplex apartment close to the street so the dust is plentiful and it is not very quiet! The shape of the room is like a narrow rectangle. My room is the narrow space. Downstairs is the kitchen and living room, when you into the room, you can see the (shoe ark?) on your right and a small laundry room on your left. Walk forward and then you can see the kitchen on your left and the living room is in front of you. There is an icebox next to the kitchen behind the wall and the sofa is next door to the icebox. Across from the sofa there is a short cabinet under the wall. At the end of this room, there is a window. Next to that there is a mirror on the wall at the corner of the window and the stairs.Climbing up the stairs you can see this level is a private space. I usually use this place to sleep and work or do some indoor sports, such as (YOGA?). There is a small desk in the centre of the room. On it there are some books and a computer. Under the desk there is a white drawer cabinet on the right. At the corner of this room, behind the desk is a bathroom. On the other side of this room is a bed under the window, and the bookcase is next to this. The wardrobe is between the bookcase and the bathroom, next to a small rocking chair
Very well written but please include more pronouns; 'it', 'this' etc for easier reading.
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practice-Describe my room
My room is a small duplex apartment close to the street, so there is a lot of dust is large and it is not very quiet! The shape of the room is shaped like a rectangle, narrow rectangle. My room is located on the narrow edge space. Downstairs is the kitchen and living room. When you walk into the room, you can see the shoe rack on your right and a small laundry room on your left. Walk forward, then you can see the kitchen on your left and the living room is in front of you. There is an icebox next to the kitchen behind the wall and the sofa is next door to the icebox.. Across from the sofa, there is an short cabinet under the wall (under the wall?? That would mean it is underneath the floorboards?). At the end of this room, there is a window on the wall. Next to the window, there is a mirror on the wall at the corner of the window and the stairs.Climbing up the stairs, then you can see the space upstairs is an private space. I usually used this place to sleeping and working or do some indoor sports, such as yoga YOGA. There is a small desk in the centre of the room. On the desk, there are some books and a computer on it. Under the desk, there is a white drawer cabinet on bottom right. At the corner of this room, behind the desk, there is a bathroom in here. On the other side of this room, there is a bed under the window, and the a bookcase next to it. The wardrobe is between the bookcase and the bathroom, next to a small rocking chair.
then = 然后
Than =/= 然后.
An is used before nouns starting with vowels a, e, i, o, and some starting with u, as well as h. A is used before all other nouns.
You cannot end a sentence with ,,, You end it with .
Otherwise good.
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