Could you enjoy the music although you had not made it? (essay) Most of people not only like listening to music, but also they enjoy a lot with it. Moreover, they do not mind if they have made it the

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Could you enjoy the music although you had not made it? (essay) Most of people not only like listening to music, but also they enjoy a lot with it. Moreover, they do not mind if they have made it theirselves or the authors are others. Firstly, the most important thing is that music is made for people can enjoy it and that supposes a profit for many people. For musician because they earn a huge among of money and for listeners who use it for different acts, such us a funny party, to concentrate theirselves on doing jobs... Secondly, people can enjoy with the music the same way as musicians although they had not made it, even it is said that people enjoy more. The reason is that some musicians are bored to listen their own music so many times that they prefer listening to other types of music. Let me conclude, by saying that the music is a wonderful way of entertainment and it does not matter who has made it because you could not know making music and enjoy it even more than any musician.

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Can you enjoy the music not having made it? (essay)

Most people not only like listening to music, but also they enjoy a lot with it*. Moreover, they do not mind if they, themselves, or others have made it.
Firstly, the most important thing is that music is made for people to enjoy, and that supposes a profit for many people. For the musician because they earn a huge among of money and for listeners who use it for different reasons, such as in a funny party or to concentrate while doing jobs...
Secondly, people can enjoy music in the same way as musicians although they had not made it, even it is said that people enjoy it more. The reason is that some musicians are bored to listen to their own music so many times that they prefer listening to other types of music.
Let me conclude by saying that music is a wonderful entertainment and it does not matter who has made it because you could not know how to make music and enjoy it even more than any musician.

*enjoy a lot of it, or, enjoy it a lot?

Could you enjoy the music even although you did not make it? (essay)

Most of people not only like listening to music, but also they enjoy a lot with(??) it. Moreover, they do not mind if they have made it themselves or the authors composer are others is someone else.
Firstly, the most important thing is that music is made for people can to enjoy it and that supposes a profit it is beneficial for many people. For musicians, because they earn a huge amount of money and for listeners who use it for different acts purposes, such us a funny party, to concentrate themselves on doing their jobs...
Secondly, people can enjoy with the music the same way as musicians although they have not made it, maybe even it is said that people enjoy more. The reason is that some musicians are bored by listening to their own music, so many times that they prefer listening to other types of music.
Let me conclude, by saying that the music is a wonderful way form of entertainment and it does not matter who has made it because you could not know making music and enjoy it even more than any musician(??).

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Good job! Sometimes the meaning isn't 100% clear, but the general idea is understood.

make music = tocar un instrumento, o cantar

funny = gracioso, chistoso / fun = divertido, entretenido

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