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My wonderful grandmother Hi everyone. Today, I'm going to speak you about my wonderful grandmother. She's 83 years old, and has a strong spirit. She had to work when was 11 years, cleaning and serving houses, hasn't had an easy life, worked for less 1$ per day, but she never gave up. Before did'nt exist washing machine and people washed the clothes with hands, Neither there wasn't hot water and had to warm and much more things... She lived a civil warrior , another thing more for add to their not easy life. In those epoque, also she passed hungry... In spite of the fact, she has never lost the smile. My grandmother is my mother ,she raised me and my sister. My mum worked and my grandparents looked after us. My grandmother never thinks about itself, always others . Thanks for correction -

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Hi everyone. 

Today, I'm going to speak to you about my wonderful grandmother.
She's 83 years old, and has a strong spirit. She had to work when she was 11 years old, cleaning and serving houses. She hasn't had an easy life, used to work for less than 1$ per day, but never gave up.
Before washing machines people had to wash clothes with their hands. Also, back then there was no hot water with which to wash the clothes, amongst other things...
She lived as a civil warrior, another difficult challenge in her already complicated life.

In those days, she also spent a lot of time hungry, due to a shortage of food.
In spite of that fact, she never lost her smile.
My grandmother is my mother, she raised me and my sister. My mum worked and my grandparents looked after us.
My grandmother never thinks about herself, always others.

Thanks for the correction -

A salute to your grandmother.. 

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My wonderful grandmother

Hi everyone.
Today, I'm going to  tell you bout my wonderful grandmother.
She's 83 years old, and has a strong spirit. She had to work when  she was 11 years ; she was  cleaning and serving houses,  she hadn't  had an easy life, in addition that she worked for less 1$ per day, but she never gave up.  
   Without  washing machine  in the past ,and the people washed the clothes with hands,as there wasn't hot water, they warmed it .

She lived as a civil warrior , another thing more to  add that  in their era their  life was not easy  , also she passed hungry...
In spite of this  fact, she has never lost the smile.
My grandmother is my mother ,she raised me and my sister. My mum worked and my grandparents looked after us.
My grandmother never thinks about herself , but rather ,always others .

Thanks for correction -
* your grandma is really  wonderful ,god bless her... :)

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My wonderful grandmother

Hi everyone.
Today, I'm going to speak to you about my wonderful grandmother.

My grandmother is 83 years old and has a strong spirit. She had to work when she was 11 years old, cleaning and serving houses.  She hasn't had an easy life. She worked for less  than 1 dollar per day, but she never gave up.

(Before washing machines people washed clothes by hand, oftentimes in cold water.) This doesn't make any sense to put here.))


She lived through a civil war, which  added to her difficult life.  In those days she was often hungry. 
In spite of everything  she has never lost her smile.

 My mum (American English = mother ) worked and my grandparents looked after us. My grandmother raised my sister and I.
My grandmother never thinks about herself.  She thinks only of others .

Thanks for correction -

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God bless her

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