A good saturday
Today I went to the mountains with my sons, my wife and my neighbours. In the mountains there was a lot of snow and there was amazing. My sons has funny a lot. They talked with an australian person that we found in the forest.
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A good saturday
Today I went to the mountains with my sons, my wife and my neighbours. In the mountains there was a lot of snow and there it was amazing. My sons has funny a lot.had a lot of fun They talked with an australian Australian that we found met in the forest.1 Nationality needs a capital letter in English.
2. Found implies that the person was lost whereas I assume that he knew where he was
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A good saturday
Today I went to the mountains with my sons, my wife and my neighbours. In the mountains there was a lot of snow and it here was amazing. My sons had a lot of fun.s funny a lot. They talked with an australian person that we met found in the forest.Good work.
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A good Saturday
I went to the mountains today with my wife, sons and the neighbors.
As there was a lot of snow, the view was incredible in the hills.
My children enjoyed it a lot. They also met a new friend in the forest who was from Australia.
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