unforgetable experince
I have an unforgetable experince.The experince is about I am going to Batam Island when holiday come.I went to Batam Island with of my sister.When I stayed in Batam my activities every morning delivers my cousin to go to school. I have visited to go to walk arround the Batam city with my sister.So, on saturday afternoon I visited to Barelang Bridge.The Barelang Bridge was beatiful scenery especially in the afternoon.Usually when the afternoon many teenagers hangout at the edge of the Bridge.And there many people sold food such as a roasted corn,roasted banana,etc.Finally,I came back to home happily.Because that is the first time I visited Batam.I will visit Batam next time.
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Unforgettable experience
I have an unforgettable experience. The experience is about when I went to Batam Island when holiday came. I went to Batam Island with my sister. When I stayed in Batam, my activities every morning delivers my cousin to go to school. I visited so I could walk around Batam city with my sister. So, on Saturday afternoon, I visited the Barelang Bridge. The Barelang Bridge had beautiful scenery, especially in the afternoon. Usually in the afternoon, many teenagers hangout at the edge of the Bridge, and there are many people selling food, such as a roasted corn, roasted banana, etc. Finally, I happily came back home. Since that is the first time I visited Batam, I will visit again someday.Want to progress faster?
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