Mirror
I grow up too fast. Last time I remember my face, I just saw a young handsome boy with long black hair, but now I have seen a morose man with less hair with more beard and dread. I have seen every morning a dead man who do not have many choose and must do many works. I see a sad man with big dreams. I say to mine, that’s fine, everyone be in same situation and passing the time make thing better but when I look at mirror one more time, I can’t believe that is true.
I just be a good boy for my parents and good brother and student and etc. Every day I practice at mirror to be good enough and every day I asked myself really who I am.
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Mirror
I grow up too fast. I use to see myself as a young handsome boy with long black hair, but now I see a morose man with less hair, a bigger beard and dreads. Every morning, when I look at myself I see a dead man who lacks choice and has too much work. I see a sad man with big dreams. I say to myself, that’s fine, everyone must be in the same situation. While passing time makes things better, when I look at the mirror again, I can’t believe that I'm in this situation.I'm just being a good boy for my parents and being a good brother and student and etc. Every day I stand in front of the mirror and practice what I'm going to do and say, and every day I ask myself who I truly am (Not sure what you meant by the last sentence, so I had to guess).
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Mirror
Im growing up too fast. Last time I remembered my face, I just saw a young handsome boy with long black hair, but now I have seen a morose man with less hair , with more beard and dread. I have seen every morning a dead man who does not have many choose choices and must do many continuously works. I see a sad man with big dreams. I say to myself mine, that’s fine, everyone is be in the same situation and the passing of the time will make things better , but when I look into the at mirror one more time, I can’t believe this to be that is true.I will/was just just be a good boy for my parents and good brother and student and etc. Yet Every day I practice infront of the at mirror to be good enough and every day I asked myself really who I am.
Very good piece of writing, we have a term "we're all in the same boat" , I think this applies to this scenario.
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