My first entry (粵語)

你好！
我係尼克、係美國人。我學緊廣東話，但係、(the back-slopping comma is not necessary here after the word "but")我講得唔好。我想學看睇、，寫同埋講廣東話！

我而家住喺英國嘅(it literally equals to the " 's" in English, usually we'll put it between 2 nouns with some kind of possessive relationships)愛丁堡。(幾)好住、，但係、太凍啦！

My first entry (粵語)

你好！
我係尼克，我係美國人。我學緊廣東話，但係我講得唔好。我想學看，寫同講廣東話！

我而家住喺英國愛丁堡。好住，但係太凍啦！

My first entry (粵語)

你好！
我係尼克、，係美國人。我學緊廣東話，但係、，我講得唔好。我想學看、寫而講廣東話！（我想學識睇、寫、同埋講廣東話！）

我而家住喺英國愛丁堡。好住、但係、太凍啦！（住得幾好，但係太凍啦。 or  但係凍咗啲）

My first entry (粵語)

你好！
我係尼克、係美國人。我學緊廣東話，但係、我講得唔好。我想學看、寫而講廣東話（我想學讀寫，同埋講廣東話）！

我而家住喺英國愛丁堡。好好住、但係、太凍啦！