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The worst waiter The girl whose name is Lisa was the worst waiter I have ever met. She was a slowcoach who did not work effectively. For example, with my mother and sister, we went to New World restaurant for dinner and Lisa , our waiter, let us wait 30 minutes before she came to our table to serve. After taking our orders, 20 minutes later, she brings the wrong dishes to us, left as quickly as she set it down and did not come back. Besides, she was so rude. For instance, Lisa was always snapping her gums while she was talking to us. In addition, when Lisa served us, she was so cold, no smile, even no greeting. Moreover, Lisa’s attitudes was so bad and unrefined such as she did not ask for our feeling after finishing our dinner . Furthermore, one more thing which made us more disapointed was that she became angry when we did not give her any tips. To sum up, the ways Lisa served us was really unacceptable that made her become the worst waiter. For all, I am absolutely sure that we never went back to New World restaurant and let that worst waiter serve us again.

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The A girl whose name is Lisa was the worst waiter I have ever met. She was a slowcoach who did not work effectively. For example, with my mother and sister, we I went to New World restaurant for dinner and Lisa , our waiter, let us wait 30 minutes before she came to our table to serve. After taking our orders, 20 minutes later, she brings brought the wrong dishes to us, left as quickly as she set it down and did not come back. Besides, she was so rude. For instance, Lisa was always snapping her gums while she was talking to us. In addition, when Lisa served us, she was so cold, no smile, even no greeting. Moreover, Lisa’s attitudes was were so bad and unrefined such as that she did not ask for our feeling after finishing our dinner . Furthermore, one more thing which made us more disappointed was that she became angry when we did not give her any tips. To sum up, the ways Lisa served us was were really unacceptable that made her become the worst waiter. For all, I am absolutely sure that we will never went go back to New World restaurant and let that worst waiter serve us again.
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The worst waiter

The A girl whose name is Lisa was the worst waiter I have ever met. She was a slowcoach who did not work effectively. For example, with my mother and sister, we I went to New World restaurant for dinner and Lisa , our waiter, let us wait 30 minutes before she came to our table to serve. After taking our orders, 20 minutes later, she brings brought the wrong dishes to us, left as quickly as she set it down and did not come back. Besides, she was so rude. For instance, Lisa was always snapping her gums while she was talking to us. In addition, when Lisa served us, she was so cold, no smile, even no greeting. Moreover, Lisa’s attitudes was were so bad and unrefined such as that she did not ask for our feeling after finishing our dinner . Furthermore, one more thing which made us more disappointed was that she became angry when we did not give her any tips. To sum up, the ways Lisa served us was were really unacceptable that made her become the worst waiter. For all, I am absolutely sure that we will never went go back to New World restaurant and let that worst waiter serve us again.
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The worst waiter

The girl whose name is Lisa was the worst waiter I have ever met. She was a slowcoach who did not work effectively. For example, with my mother and sister, I went to New World restaurant for dinner and Lisa , our waiter, let us wait 30 minutes before she came to our table to serve. After taking our orders, 20 minutes later, she brought  wrong dishes to us, left  quickly after she set it down and did not come back. Besides, she was so rude. For instance, Lisa was always snapping her gums while she was talking to us. In addition, when Lisa served us, she was so cold, no smile, even no greeting. Moreover, Lisa’s attitude was so bad and unrefined, that  she did not ask about our feelings after we finished our dinner . Furthermore, one more thing which made us more disapointed was that she became angry when we did not give her any tips. To sum up, the ways Lisa served us was really unacceptable that (what) made her become the worst waiter (i have ever seen?). For all, I am absolutely sure that we would never went  go back to New World restaurant and let that worst waiter serve us again.

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