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A quick glance at the tables shows sales data of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas between 1999 and 2004 in 5 countries, which includes UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, Sweden.
As can be seen from the first table, there was a steady rise in the sales of Fairtrade coffee. Sales in UK rose markedly with 1.5 to 20 millions of euros over the period 1999 to 2004 as a whole. In fifth place is Sweden which has relatively small increase of 0.2 millions of euros out of the 5 countries. Moreover, sales in Switzerland occupied 2nd position ranging from 3 to 6 million euros for 5 years.
According to the second table, banana sales in Switzerland was in first place with 32 millions of euros during the period from 1999 to 2004. However, sales of bananas in Sweden was ranked 4th and that in Denmark was ranked 5th with the former standing at 1 millions of euros and 0.9 millions of euros the latter.
In conclusion, sales of coffee in 2004 is about 4 times as much millions of euros as that in 1999 and sales of bananas is approximately 3 times higher in 2004 than in 1999.
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Table Writing
Please help me correct it:)And another question is:I am not sure what tense I have to use in the article.
A quick glance at the tables shows sales data of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas between 1999 and 2004 in 5 countries, which includes the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden.
As can be seen from the first table, there was a steady rise in the sales of Fairtrade coffee. Sales in the UK rose markedly with from 1.5 to 20 millions of euros over in/during the period from 1999 to 2004 as a whole. In fifth place is Sweden which has had a relatively small increase of 0.2 millions of euros out of the 5 countries. Moreover, sales in Switzerland occupied the 2nd position ranging from 3 to 6 million euros for 5 years.
According to the second table, banana sales in Switzerland was in first place with 32 millions of euros during the period from 1999 to 2004. However, sales of bananas in Sweden was ranked 4th and that in Denmark was ranked 5th with the former standing at 1 millions of euros and 0.9 millions of euros for the latter.
In conclusion, sales of coffee in 2004 is are about 4 times as much millions of euros as that in 1999 and sales of bananas is are approximately 3 times higher in 2004 than in 1999.
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Table Writing
Please help me correct it:)And another question is:I am not sure what tense I have to use in the article.
The two tables bellow shows the sales figures for Fairtrade- labelled Coffee and Bananas. In the countries UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, Sweden for 1999 and 2004.
From the sales figures of Table 1 (Coffee), it shows there was a steady growth in the sales figures for the Fairtrade coffee from 1999 to 2004. Based on the increase in the sales, the first place goes to the UK with a significant increase of 18.5 Millon Euros. The second position goes to Switzerland, with an increase of 3 Million Euros. The third position goes to Belgium with an increase of 0.3 Million Euros, and the fourth place goes to Denmark and Sweden with a slight growth of 0.2 Million Euros.
From the Table 2 (Bananas). It also shows there was a steady increase in the sales figures from 1999 to 2004. Based on the growth in the sales, the first place goes to Switzerland, with a significant increase of 32 Million Euros. The second position goes to the UK, with an increase of 4.5 Million Euros. The third place goes to Belguim with an increase of 3.4 Million Euros and respectively the next positions goes to Denmark with an increase of 1.1 Million Euros and Sweden with an increase of 0.8 Million Euros.
To summarise the sales figures for coffee in 2004 are four times higher compared to the figures in 1999 and in terms of Bananas they are approximately three times greater in 2004 compared to 1999.
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