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Pollution in Rivers and Seas
Pollution is a big world problem because of thisit destroys or damages all the environment. As a consequence of the advances and progress of the human beings, pollution gets worseeach more time as each one of us generates more and more garbage.There is all kinds of garbage in our rivers and seas, and their fauna and flora are dying little by little. Why? It’s simple. We are not treating the garbage in the correct way. Resolving this, in my opinion, requires two actions.
- Recycling garbage: if all of us in our homes and workplaces start up the culture begin to recycle, it will be easier to avoid generating a lot of garbage unnecessarily.
- Don’t throw garbage in the environment: the people must be conscious (must realize?) that all the garbage thrown in the environment, could be end up in the rivers or seas.
To complete these this actions, the government must be more serious about controlling that the pollution so it doesn’t grow and must punish those whom are careless unconscious with the environment, especially factory owners with the owners of factory.
Conscious/unconscious: the way you used "unconscious" is not typically done, though a statement such as "must punish those who unconsciously harm the environment" might be used.
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