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Pollution in rivers and seas Pollution is a big world problem because of this destroy or damage all the environment as a consequence of the advances and progress of the human being. Each more time each one of us generate more and more garbage. All kind of garbage there is in our rivers and seas and their fauna and flora are dying little by little. Why? It’s simple. We are not treating the garbage in the correct way, in my opinion, is necessary two actions. “Recycling garbage”, if all of us in our homes and workplaces start up the culture to recycle, will be easier to avoid generating a lot of garbage unnecessary. “Don’t throw garbage in the environment”, the people must be conscious that all the garbage thrown in the environment, could be end up in the rivers or seas. To complete this actions, government must be more serious to control that the pollution doesn’t grow and to punish whom are unconscious with the environment, especially with the owners of factory.

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Pollution in Rivers and Seas

Pollution is a big world problem because of thisit destroys or damages all the environment. As a consequence of the advances and progress of the human beings, pollution gets worseeach more time as each one of us generates more and more garbage.

There is all kinds of garbage in our rivers and seas, and their fauna and flora are dying little by little. Why? It’s simple. We are not treating the garbage in the correct way. Resolving this, in my opinion, requires two actions.

 - Recycling garbage: if all of us in our homes and workplaces start up the culture begin to recycle, it will be easier to avoid generating a lot of garbage unnecessarily.

 - Don’t throw garbage in the environment: the people must be conscious (must realize?) that all the garbage thrown in the environment, could be end up in the rivers or seas.

To complete these this actions, the government must be more serious about controlling that the pollution so it doesn’t grow and must punish those whom are careless unconscious with the environment, especially factory owners with the owners of factory.


Conscious/unconscious: the way you used "unconscious" is not typically done, though a statement such as "must punish those who unconsciously harm the environment" might be used. 

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