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What Happened Yesterday Hi friends, I am talking about Cricket International T20 match it is going on India. yesterday match was India Vs Bangladesh held on Bangalore it was a unforgettable and heart beat match to Indian Fans. if that match lose India very less chance to go do enter the next stage. every one danced after India beaded Bangladesh where were see the TV Room. Please correct.

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What Happened Yesterday

Hi friends,

I am talking about Cricket International T20 match (tense/mood confusion)

    I'd like to talk about

it is going on India. (adj clause, use in + country)

    that is going on in India.

yesterday match was India Vs Bangladesh (possessive)

    Yesterday's match was India vs Bangladesh

held on Bangalore. (in + country)

    held in Bangalore.

it was a unforgettable and heart beat match to Indian Fans. (an + vowel sound, word choice, common noun)

    It was an unforgettable and heart pounding match to Indian fans. 

if that match lose India very less chance to go do enter the next stage. (word order, word choice, phrasal verb, don't use do + infinitive)

    If India loses that match, they have less of a chance to go on to the playoffs. 

every one danced after India beaded Bangladesh where were see the TV Room. (spelling, past participle, syntax confusion)

    Everyone danced after we saw India beat Bangladesh on TV.

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