Life after death

By losing a close person forever, life becomes strange; it feels like you are not supposed to live, as though you should die as well. When you wake up every morning and you realize that he doesn't exist any more, you feel the same moment's sorrow as when you first learned about it. My thoughts go out to all who mourn their beloved ones; be strong: this is the other side of life. Unfortunately we all have to see it….and we have to face it bravely.

Yes, this is good as it is but I made a few changes because I think I know what you are trying to say; I just lost my father. Stay strong.

Life after death

By losing a close person forever, life becomes strange,

Feeling like you are not supposed to live,

As though you should also die,

When you wake up every morning and you realised that he didn't exist anymore,

You feel the same moment's sorrow when you know about it.

My thoughts to all who mourned their beloved ones, be strong.

This is the another fact of life, unfortunately we will all see it,

But we should still face it bravely .