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The village.Chapter 14."We have to change our preseason training method".Please,correct my mistakes Today is Wednesday. As usual I came home after my work. Rod asked me to meet him in the townpark. When I finished my homework I headed there. In a few minutes I arrive at the park. Rod stood at the fontain when I spotted them. "Hi,!" "Hi! Let's have a walk. I won't talk about any nonsense. Better we'll start from important theme right now." said our cap. "I'm listening..." "I don't like our teamspirit. I mean this spirit is well, but we have to change our lifestyle." "What are you meaning?" "Our boozes. We must to stop whoredom! Do not you see?" "Maybe you are right." "We have only one game before the season starts. Also we should remain in this league. We will be faced with harder rivals in the upper league. So, if we go on to do the things which (or that?) we do now the troubles come to us..." "What do you offer?" "First we have to organize some interesting event. I hope you'll manage it." Rod looked at me meaningfully. "Do you want to say that I'll do it?" "Yes. Think about. Tommorow we'll meet in the pub to have a drink tea. Then we'll talk about

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The village.Chapter 14."We have to change our preseason training method".Please,correct my mistakes

Today is Wednesday. As usual I came home after my work. Rod asked me to meet him in the town park. When I finished my homework I headed there. In a few minutes I arrived at the park. Rod stood in front of the fountain when I spotted them. 
"Hi,!"
"Hi! Let's have a walk. I won't talk about any nonsense. Better we'll start from important theme right now." said our cap.
"I'm listening..."
"I don't like our team spirit. I mean the spirit is well, but we have to change our lifestyle."
"What do you mean"
"Our boozes. We must to stop whoredom! Do not you see?" 
"Maybe you are right."
"We have only one game before the season starts. Also we should remain in this league. We will be faced with harder rivals in the upper league. So, if we go on to do the things which (or that?) we do now the troubles come to us..."
"What do you offer?"
"First we have to organize some interesting event. I hope you'll manage it." Rod looked at me meaningfully.
"Do you want to say that I'll do it?"
"Yes. Think about. Tommorow we'll meet in the pub to have tea. Then we'll talk about it.
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