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Do Hackatons work for something? Recently I went to my first Hackaton. For those of you who does not now what a Hackaton is, it can be resumed as a couple of days with a lot of cofee and pizza and people from different fields working together to achieve a goal. My question after this two days was if the hours without sleep and all the cofee and pizza did actually make any effects in the live of the people around me or it was just an experience for me and the rest of the people in the Hackaton. The first objective of a Hackaton is to make students apply all the theory in the real world, but there is a second objective what is change the world to a better place. The problem came when is a corporation who organized it. Then the goal to achieve it is a goal that the company want to solved, and if they could make a profit. I think the best of these meetings is the people you meet, and you can colaborate in a future. Also I think that two days are not enough. Some projects needs more time, in the two days it can iniziated, but for achieve something they need more time and the help of the organization.

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Do Hackathons Work for Something?

Recently, I went to my first Hackathon. For those of you who do not now what a Hackathon is, it [recommended: is an event that] can occur over a couple of days with a lot of coffee and pizza and people from different fields work together to achieve a goal.
My question after these two days was if all of the hours without sleep and all of the coffee and pizza actually did make a difference in the lives of the people around me, or it was just an experience for me and the rest of the people in the Hackathon.
The first objective of a Hackathon is to make students apply all the theory [they know] to the real world, but there is a second objective, which is change the world to a better place.
A problem arises when a corporation organises it. From this, the goal to be achieved is a goal that the company wants to be solved, so that they could make a profit.
I think the best thing about these meetings is the people you meet.  You can collaborate in the future.
Also, I think that two days are not enough. Some projects needs more time. In the two days most of them can initiated, but in order to achieve something, they need more time and the help of the organization.

*** I would recommend shortening your sentences. Many of these sentences were too long, and there were many errors as a result. Simpler sentences are easier to produce, and convey your meaning just as well. 

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