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To Consider Myself
I consider myself happy. I consider myself to be the hard-working. I like to read a lot because I want to broaden my mind. I am the sociable. I have a few reliable friends. I like to discuss the news with my friends.
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Hi Alex. Here are some notes; I hope they help.
When writing a title, it's normal to capitalise the initial of all of the words, or of the keywords.
I've marked spelling or grammar mistakes with yellow. Where I've rephrased something to make it clearer or more natural, I've marked it in blue.
To consider myself
I consider myself happy. I consider myself to be the hard-working. I like to read much because I want to winden broaden my broad-minded. I am the sociable. I have a few reliable friends. I like to discuss the news with my friends the news.blue highlights - spelling error
yellow highlights - I changed the word order
This is really good! I changed your sentence to say "to broaden my mind" because it is a common phrase. An adjective form would be "open-minded". I think you are an open-minded person!
The last sentence is almost correct. I can understand it, but the "with my friends" clause fits better at the end.
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