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The Best of the God’s gifts The eyes which are looking at me glitter than the stars in the desert. When you are tickled, your eyes look like the eyes of children. Oh, those are the most innocent and pure things that I have never seen! Those are the descriptions of my boyfriend, James. Let me explain about him. He likes volunteering. He’s is part of a program by Microsoft. He teaches computer to highschool kids. He goes there twice a week. He believes that education makes them overcome socio-economic barriers. In addition, he likes volunteering at his church. He does welcome team and join the children’s church at there. When he volunteers for the church, he is not reluctant to go there at 8:30 in Sunday morning when most of people are still in the bed. When I visited his church, a woman talked to me that her children loves to listen to the sermon on his lap. When I heard her, I was very proud that I have been dating with him. He does not meet women just for fun. When we started to date, he talked about marriage, how to raise kids, and etc. I felt kinda pressures, but later I found he does not meet women to enjoy. When we talked about those stuffs, He looked very serious and he was not hesitant to talk about it which seemed that he had thought about it for long time. He is very wise to give me advice and it solves my problems. When I confront with people, I feel so depressed and frustrated. However, whenever it happens, he gives me advice and it solved properly. First, when I had troubles with my ex-roommates, I tried to hide myself from them. Even though we reconciled after the argument, I was scared to be around with them because, I was afraid if they think me as a bad person. However, he pointed that that’s because I cared about other’s opinions too much and if I approached them without thinking of their opinions about me, soon they will change their opinions. It was right, and it worked! Second example, when I got depressed after a school officer screamed at me, he advised me to ask my mom to say to her as the manager can talk to the other manager in the company. And it worked! I feel so blessed to date him. He’s such a sincere and wise person. He is such a mature man and I’m in awe at him. He is the best gift from God.

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The Best of the God’s Gifts

The eyes which are looking at me glitter like the stars in the desert. When you are tickled, your eyes look like the eyes of children.
Oh, those are the most innocent and pure things that I have ever seen!
Those are the descriptions of my boyfriend, James. Let me tell you about him.
He likes volunteering. He’s is part of a program by Microsoft. He teaches computer science to high school kids. He goes there twice a week. He believes that education makes them overcome socio-economic barriers. In addition, he likes volunteering at his church. He is part of the welcome team and joins the children’s church at there. When he volunteers for the church, he is not reluctant to go there at 8:30 on Sunday morning when most of people are still in the bed. When I visited his church, a woman told to me that her children love to listen to the sermon on his lap. When I heard her, I was very proud that I have been dating with him.
He does not meet women just for fun. When we started to date, he talked about marriage and how to raise kids, and etc. I felt kinda pressured, but later I found he does not meet women to enjoy. When we talked about those things, he looked very serious and he was not hesitant to talk about it which made it seem like he had thought about it for long time.
He is very wise to give me advice and it solves my problems. When I confront with people, I feel so depressed and frustrated. However, whenever it happens, he gives me advice and it gets solved properly. First, when I had troubles with my ex-roommates, I tried to hide myself from them. Even though we reconciled after the argument, I was scared to be around with them because I was afraid that they would think of me as a bad person. However, he pointed that that’s because I cared about others' opinions too much and if I approached them without thinking of their opinions of me, soon they would change their opinions. He was right, and it worked! Another example is when I got depressed after a school officer screamed at me. He advised me to ask my mom to say to her as the manager can talk to the other manager of the company. And it worked!
I feel so blessed to date him. He’s such a sincere and wise person. He is such a mature man and I’m in awe at him. He is the best gift from God.


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