Please correct my homework (:
If you ask someone about their plans and ambitions, agree to it's difficult to tell it at once. One needs to think it over. It's clear that in the course of time some things will change and the plans and ambitions will change too, because such change determines your progress. You aren't progressing if your reflections and ideas are still the same. I think it's very important that your ambitions correspond to you and your lifestyle. There are so many people in the world who don't know what they want to do, so if you know it about yourself, let's use it just now!
I think this subject is a little personal, so I'll tell not all. I'm interesed in learning foreign languages. I really like studying, going to the university and doing my homework. I'll be a teacher and I hope I'll be a dood teacher. But I'll not stop at it. I would like to be translator. In my opinion the world of words is very interesting, attractive and engrossing. I always try to translate as good as I can. I plan to improve my English skills and in summer, on holidays, I'll learn German.
Besides it I love to do some sports. Lately I've been interesed in Yoga, but it isn't my one hobby - also I like jogging and playing tennis. Yoga is showing me what does my body can do. I'm doing Yoga because its brings me calm and helps me to control myself. I think I'll still doing Yoga.
Finally I believe that when a person realizes his plans, he's more happy, so I wish to active your objectives.
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If you ask someone about their plans and ambitions, agree to it's difficult to tell it answer at once. One needs to think it over. It's clear that in over the course of time, some things will change, and the plans and ambitions will change, too, because such change determines your progress. You aren't progressing if your reflections and ideas are still the same. (NOTE: This is a grammatically-correct sentence, but in a paragraph talking about the course of time in general instead of comparing two moments in it, "if your reflections and ideas stay the same" might work better.) I think it's very important that your ambitions correspond to you and your lifestyle. There are so many people in the world who don't know what they want to do, so if you know it about yourself, let's use it just now just use it now!
I think this subject is a little personal, so I'll tell not all not tell everything. I'm interested in learning foreign languages. I really like studying, going to the university, and doing my homework. I'll be a teacher and I hope I'll be a dood good teacher. But I'll not stop at it. I would like to be a translator. In my opinion, the world of words is very interesting, attractive, and engrossing. I always try to translate as good well as I can. (NOTE: It might sound a little irregular, but "as best I can" would also be a decent way of saying that!) I plan to improve my English skills and in summer, on holidays, I'll learn German.
Besides it that, I love to do some sports. Lately I've been interested in Yoga, but it isn't my one hobby - also I I also like jogging and playing tennis. (NOTE: "Also I" doesn't sound unnatural and wouldn't come across as wrong, but putting "also" first implies you're adding a new thought instead of directly elaborating on the previous phrase.) Yoga is showing me what does my body can do. I'm doing Yoga because its brings me calm and helps me to control myself. I think I'll still keep doing Yoga.
Finally, I believe that when a person realizes his plans, he's more happy, so I wish to active your objectives. (NOTE: I can't parse the last phrase clearly, and I'm not entirely sure what the best edit I can suggest for it would be, but "so I wish for you to be active in meeting your objectives" seems to me like it might be what you're looking for.)
I think this subject is a little personal, so I'll tell not all not tell everything. I'm interested in learning foreign languages. I really like studying, going to the university, and doing my homework. I'll be a teacher and I hope I'll be a dood good teacher. But I'll not stop at it. I would like to be a translator. In my opinion, the world of words is very interesting, attractive, and engrossing. I always try to translate as good well as I can. (NOTE: It might sound a little irregular, but "as best I can" would also be a decent way of saying that!) I plan to improve my English skills and in summer, on holidays, I'll learn German.
Besides it that, I love to do some sports. Lately I've been interested in Yoga, but it isn't my one hobby - also I I also like jogging and playing tennis. (NOTE: "Also I" doesn't sound unnatural and wouldn't come across as wrong, but putting "also" first implies you're adding a new thought instead of directly elaborating on the previous phrase.) Yoga is showing me what does my body can do. I'm doing Yoga because its brings me calm and helps me to control myself. I think I'll still keep doing Yoga.
Finally, I believe that when a person realizes his plans, he's more happy, so I wish to active your objectives. (NOTE: I can't parse the last phrase clearly, and I'm not entirely sure what the best edit I can suggest for it would be, but "so I wish for you to be active in meeting your objectives" seems to me like it might be what you're looking for.)
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Please correct my homework (:
If you ask someone about their plans and ambitions, agree to it's difficult to tell it at once. One needs to think it over. It's clear that in the course of time some things will change and the plans and ambitions will change too, because such change determines your progress. You aren't progressing if your reflections and ideas are still the same. I think it's very important that your ambitions correspond with you and your lifestyle. There are so many people in the world who don't know what they want to do, so if you know it about yourself, let's use it just now!I think this subject is a little personal, so I'll say not all. I'm interested in learning foreign languages. I really like studying, going to the university and doing my homework. I'll be a teacher and I hope I'll be a good teacher. But I'll not stop at it. I would like to be translated. In my opinion the world of words is very interesting, attractive and engrossing. I always try to translate as well as I can. I plan to improve my English skills and in summer, on holidays, I'll learn German.
Besides it I love to do some sports. Lately I've been interested in Yoga, but it isn't my one hobby - also I like jogging and playing tennis. Yoga is showing me what does my body can do. I'm doing Yoga because it brings me calm and helps me to control myself. I think I'll still do Yoga.
Finally, I believe that when a person realizes his plans, he's happier, so I wish to act your objectives.
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If you ask someone about their plans and ambitions, agree to it's difficult to tell it at once.
I do not understand what you means saying 'agree to it's difficult to tell", but I would say like that: If you asked someone about their plans and ambitions, you would agree that it's difficult to answer that question at once.
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