Why you should visit Black Forest?
Black Forest is one of Germany's most visited places. This forest is located in the South West of the federal state Baden-Württemberg. It's really beautiful there and it has a lot of firs, valleys and mountains, some small lakes and it's famous for the traditional "kuckucks" watch and of course the black forest pie. This area is also known as great place for skiing, especially the swiss love to visit the near mountain "Feldberg" in the black forest, because it isn't far away from the border and a daliy skiing ticket as well as the food are much cheaper than in Switzerland. In summer, black forest offers you a big area for hiking and cyclying. In the north you can walk through its national park, it's called "Naturpark Schwarzwald".
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Why You Should Visit the Black Forest?
The Black Forest is one of Germany's most visited places. This forest is located in the southwest of the federal state Baden-Württemberg. It's really beautiful there, and it has a lot of firs, valleys, mountains and some small lakes. It's also famous for the traditional "kuckucks" watch and, of course, the Black Forest Pie. This area is also known as great place for skiing. In particular, the Swiss love to visit the nearby mountain "Feldberg" in the Black Forest because it isn't far away from the border and a daily skiing ticket as well as (better: plus) the food are much cheaper than they are in Switzerland. In summer, the Black Forest offers you a big area for hiking and cycling. In the north, you can walk through its national park, which is called the "Naturpark Schwarzwald".Please correct my text about my sightseeing trip.
*** Very good. The two biggest mistakes were actually quite minor in the grand scheme of things:
1) There were a couple of run-on sentences. To avoid this, it's best practice to break the longer sentences into smaller ones.
2) Capitalisation: keep this consistent throughout your piece. You should always capitalise proper nouns (such as the Black Forest). I would also recommend capitalising all parts of the title except for the articles, but this isn't really an issue in iTalki I suppose.
Hopefully I get to visit someday, this is one of the places in Germany I haven't had the opportunity to visit yet. :)
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