A little essay

Electrician work. My life experience

This is the chapter of my life that I call "experience". In November 2015, it had been one year since I was hired for this job. I did my work the best as I could and I really liked it. But eventually, frustration comes, and in those moments I feel weakness and sadness. When you do the best you can, you hope that it will yield results - at the very least, in the form of some satisfaction and pleasure. So and I began to think about it. I didn't have any reason to continue that job, because I didn’t get any satisfaction. This was expressed through a low salary, low staff qualification, awful working conditions, etc. I decided that I need to make a change. At those moments, when you feel deep frustration, you begin to recognize that all you are doing is killing time, and then it tears you down.

Everybody has to decide for themselves how they will live their life. As for me, I believe that everybody should have the opportunity to seek a better life. Another question is who can change own life? Do either have equal opportunities and are either keen to get a change? I think everyone has to answer this question for himself. Are you ready to tolerate those things or not? It’s your choice.

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I've marked grammar and spelling mistakes in yellow, and where I've rephrased things for clarity or to sound more natural, I've marked them blue. Magenta is for when I've changed a word to fit the context better.

I'm not sure what you meant by "low staff qualification". Did you mean that you didn't receive any training which helped your career?

"Et cetera" means "and so on". If you write "and etc.", it's redundant.

I'm not sure what you meant here: "Do either have equal opportunities and are either keen to get a change?"

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As for my opinion, I have seen some statistics which say that most people who run their own businesses are much more content compared to people who work as employees. In my experience, I've found that to be true, and I normally recommend self-employment to my friends whenever their complain about their jobs.

Hope that helps; have a good one!