The Stranger. Part 68. "The Sudden Turn". Please, correct my mistakes
We went on to walk through the strang city looking for the green bus. I couldn't believe that we did it. It looked like someone's joke. The sky was dark, there wasn't Moon in it. There was (were?) many trash liying on the ground of roads. We didn't notice any car, whatever (or anyway?) we went across the sidewalk. When we passed the crossroad we continued to go ahead. A few minutes later we spotted a gas station in front of us. An Oldman met us when we approach there.
"Good night strangers!Can I think you are going from far away...?" he said.
"Good night! Yes, you're right. We hurry." I said.
"You have nowhere to hurry. Throw away the garbage!"
Do it yourself! I answered.
"The garbage is in your head!"
"What?"
"You still haven't noticed the girl next to you is absent."
"What?" I repeated.
"Yes, this man is right. I'm just your illusion, your dream." Lisa said.
"Then why are you here? Why have you followed me all this time?"
"I came to these strang worlds to save you" Lisa answered...
I hope this is not disgustingly :)
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The Stranger. Part 68. "The Sudden Turn". Please, correct my mistakes
We went on to a walk through the strang strange city looking for the green bus. I couldn't believe that we did it. that. It looked like someone's jokeIt seemed like a joke. The sky was dark, there wasn't it was like there wasn't a Moon in it moon in the sky. There was (were? was is correct but many is not the right adjective) many much trash liying on the ground of roads. We didn't notice any cars, whatever (or anyway? anyway would work, but whatever is strange because when it is used that way it is negative in meaning) we went across the street to the sidewalk. When we passed the a crossroad and we continued to go ahead forward. A few minutes later , we spotted a gas station in front of us. An old man met us when we approach. there."Good night evening strangers!Can I think you must be going very far tonightare going from far away...?" he said.( greeting at night time is: Good Evening, good night is only used when you are going to sleep.)
"Good night! evening!Yes, you're right. We are in a hurry." I said.
"You have nowhere to hurry to. Throw away out my the garbage!"
Do it yourself! I answered.
"The garbage is in your head!"
"What?"
"You still haven't noticed the girl next to you is absent not there."
"What?" I repeated.
"Yes, this man is right. I'm just your illusion, your dream." Lisa said.
"Then why are you here? Why have you followed me all this time?"
"I came to these strang strangeworlds to save you" Lisa answered...
I hope this is not disgustingly :)
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