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In biology, regeneration is the name given to the morphogenetic processes that enable multicellular organisms repair and maintain their morphological and physiological integrity. In urodele amphibians regeneration occurs in a wide variety of anatomical structures that include gills, limbs, tail, jaws, cornea, lens and ventricle of the heart, after partial or total removal. resection of the right foreleg 3 adult individuals neotenous was performed. Through an H-E staining and PAS microscopic study. Histology of regeneration emphasizes continuity and interrelation between the mature tissue and tissue regeneration, no absolute demarcation line between the two. According to this premise, according to the experimental work and scientific literature. the regeneration steps proposed by Tank is synthesized, and stadiums that do not belong to this is obvious. The stages defined only for regeneration are: Wound healing, des differentiation, early outbreak, half bud, late outbreak.
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A project summary
In biology, regeneration is the name given to the morphogenetic processes that enable multicellular organisms to repair and maintain their morphological and physiological integrity. In urodele amphibians, regeneration occurs in a wide variety of anatomical structures after partial or total removal, including gills, limbs, tails, jaws, the cornea and lens of the eyes, and ventricles of the heart. after partial or total removal. Resection of the right foreleg of three adult individuals' neotenous was performed. Through an H-E staining and PAS microscopic study. Histology of regeneration emphasizes continuity and interrelation between the mature tissue and tissue regeneration, without an absolute demarcation line between the two. According to this premise and to the experimental work and scientific literature. The regeneration steps proposed by Tank is synthesized, and stadiums that do not belong to this is obvious. The stages defined only for regeneration are: wound healing, des differentiation, early outbreak, half bud, and late outbreak.Grammatical corrections: subject-verb agreement, plurality, capitalization.
Sentence fragments are highlighted in orange. Sentence fragments like the ones here are basically incomplete ideas. "Through an H-E staining and PAS microscopic study..." What happened? What was determined? Add a comma after the word "study" and finish the thought, such as "Through an H-E staining and PAS microscopic study, it was determined that there was no demarcation line between mature tissue and regenerated tissue." (I don't know what it actually determined; this is an example.)
Also, make sure you stay on topic. There was no mention of "Tank" or "stadiums" before the second to last sentence, and the reader has no idea what those terms mean in the context of the rest of the paragraph.
Other than that, great job! Writing on scientific topics in another language is very hard, and you did it well :)
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