Humanitarian subjects and future career
Some people say that humanitarian subjects such as philosophy, history and literature that people study in universities have no value for their future career. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples.
Nowadays, we live in a world increasingly dominated by science and job market that value factual information and clinical skills .Subsequently, most of the employment -minded students see that it is pointless to study impractical subjects such as humanities . In my opinion, studying any discipline related to human culture is immensely beneficial for students careers for many reasons .
Firstly, the vast job market and the variety of Career opportunities that any humanity majors could have. According to the last statistics about employment chances for various major graduates ,it was found that more than two third of the available places were taken by humanities graduates . Because of the adaptability of those graduated to various kinds of jobs . Such as, secretaries ,receptionists , journalists and researchers in different social fields . There are, also,different careers that necessitates applicants to have some basics of theses subjects . Archaeologists and tourist guides ,for instance , should have strong background in history . Virtually, many people who would directly benefit from their knowledge about humantarian subjects.
Secondly, these subjects value in terms of the lifelong skills that students acquire from studying it. Philosophy as one of the most eminent humanitarian subject emphasize critical thinking ,reasoning and logical analysis of any idea or phenomenon. It also value great morals and evidently defend them . such as justice, right and validity. These skills and morals ,undoubtedly, shapes the minds and empowers the skills of many people in different careers . lawyers ,legislators and political leaders could markedly be distinguished by these skills in their jobs .
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Humanitarian subjects and future career ( we would just say "Humanities" not "humanitarian subjects")
Some people say that humanitarian subjects such as philosophy, history and literature that people study in universities have no value for their future career. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples.Nowadays, we live in a world increasingly dominated by science and job markets that value factual information and clinical skills .Subsequently, most of the employment -minded students see that it is pointless to study impractical subjects such as humanities . In my opinion, studying any discipline related to human culture is immensely beneficial for students careers for many reasons .
Firstly, humanity majors have access to a vast job market and a wide the variety of Career opportunities that any humanity majors could have. According to the latest statistics about employment chances for various major graduates ,it was found that more than two thirds of the available places were taken by humanities graduates because of the adaptability of those graduates to various kinds of jobs . These include positions such as, secretaries ,receptionists , journalists and researchers in different social fields . There are, also,different careers that necessitates ("require" would sound better here than "necessitate")applicants to have some basics of theses subjects . Archaeologists and tourist guides ,for instance , should have strong background in history . Virtually, many people who would directly benefit from their knowledge about humantarian subjects. (I don't understand this last sentence perhaps "Clearly many people can benefit from their study of humanities")
Secondly, these subjects are valuable in terms of the lifelong skills that students acquire from studying them. Philosophy as one of the most eminent humanitarian subjects in humanities emphasizes critical thinking ,reasoning and logical analysis of any idea or phenomenon. It also values great morals and evidently defends them . such as justice, right and validity ("validity" doesn't seem correct here). These skills and morals ,undoubtedly, shapes the minds and empowers the skills of many people in different careers . lawyers ,legislators and political leaders could markedly be distinguished by these skills in their jobs .
You have a great vocabulary and understanding of English. Your answer is very ambitious and answers the question well. However you do need to think about your sentence structure, some of your sentences are too short and do not include a verb. In addition it is not good practice to start sentences in English which connecting words like "Because". As take care with whether verbs have s or not.
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