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"I shop therefore I am". 200 words "I shop therefore I am" is one of the most famous sentences of Barbara Kruger, an american artist. It became a point of reflection about our society and our lives. Are we all subject to shopping? In our society don't we have a stop to excesses? Shopping is a fundamental part of our lives but it is dangerous giving it too power. Shopping often works as a substitute for something that we are missing in life. It is wrong thinking about ourselves for the things that we have or what we wear. The worst aspect is that this situation happens without people's realising. For example, new generations can't imagine a life without buying videogames, DvD, clothes (and also expensive clothes), etc. Working is useful to gain money and this implies that we spend it buying consumer goods that we don't need. In brief, we are persuaded to buy by our society and in particular by misleading advertisement. We have to stop us and just think. It is beautiful to can use objects that we like but we hate to obtain a composure and to learn being happy for what we had instead of being sad for what we don't have.

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"I Shop Therefore I Am". 200 words

"I shop therefore I am," is one of the most famous sentences of from Barbara Kruger, an American artist. It became a point of reflection about our society and our lives. Are we all subject susceptible to shopping? In our society don't we have a stop limit to excesses
 our excess? Shopping is a fundamental part of our lives, but it is dangerous giving to give it too much power. Shopping often works as a substitute for something that we are missing in life. It is wrong thinking about to judge ourselves for on the things that we have or what we wear. The worst aspect is that this situation happens without people's realising people realizing it. For example, new generations can't imagine a life without buying video games, DvD's, clothes (and also expensive clothes), etc. Working is useful to gain money and this implies that we spend it buying consumer goods that we don't need.

(NOTE: This last sentence is grammatically correct but hard to understand. What about working for money implies the way a person will spend it?)


In brief, we are persuaded to buy by our society and in particular by misleading advertisements. We have to stop us ourselves and just think. It is beautiful to that we can use objects that we like, but we hate to obtain retain a composure and to learn being to be happy for with what we have had instead of being sad for over what we don't have.

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