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a discussion about should the government pay for the public health care There are increasing problems in the modern society have been put in front of human especially the public health, with conflicting view about who should take the responsibility of it. Some people think individual health is the responsibility of themselves and do not think the government should afford it. Advocates of this think that there are too many things which need the authority to do such as improving the surrounding of public, enhance the army or developing the education of nation. They are all need money and take the major time of government and a most important factor is that they are all more important for either the nation or the public than the public health and could not be enhanced by individuals. By contrast, people could exercise themselves such as running in street or playing football and basketball and all of these just take a little time of people from their screen or computer game. But most people do not think so and they think some people are avoiding the most important problem. Firstly, healthcare would spend a lot of money especially if they suffered serious illness and which may give a heavy load to a family or even destroy it. Why the government refused pay for them, an ordinary person and also a tax-payer of the country. Secondly, they think the healthcare of public is an important issue as the education and the military force. Only everyone in a country has a physical health the country could have an energetic force and a strong energy. Healthcare is not an activity for individuals but also a future for a country. In my opinion, healthcare is an important part in personal life but government should pay more attention in it and pay the major of its cost. There can be no more basic obligation than to help ourselves and future generations to enjoy longer, healthier spans on the Earth that we share.

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a discussion about should the government pay for the public health care

There are increasing problems in the modern society facing by the people, especially the public health, with the conflicting view about who should take the responsibility of it. Some people think individual health is the responsibility for themselves and do not think the government should afford it.

Advocates of this think that there are too many things which require authority attention to do, such as improving the surrounding of public, enhance the army or develop the better education for the nation. They  all need money and take the major time of government and as a matter of fact, they are very important for the entire nation. By contrast, people could do exercises such as jogging or playing football and basketball and all of these just take a little time of people from their screen or computer game.

However most people do not think so and they think some people are avoiding the most important problem. Firstly, healthcare would spend a lot of money especially if they suffered serious illness and which may give a burden to a family or even destroy it. Why the government refused to pay for them, an ordinary person and also a taxpayer of the country. Secondly, they think the health care of public is an important issue as the education and the military force. With the healthy nation, the country could have an energetic force and a strong energy. Healthcare is not an activity for individuals but also a future for a country.

In my opinion, healthcare is an important part of personal life but the government should pay more attention to it and pay the major cost of it. There can be no more basic obligation than to help ourselves and future generations to enjoy longer, healthier spans on the Earth that we share.

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