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Sydney - The arrival I still remember the day I arrived In Sydney, Australia. I was so scared! Why is being out of our comfort zone so daunting? It is a mix of emotions such as fear, excitement, happiness, hope, and power. Realizing a dream is incredibly overwhelming, especially when it involves taking a plane and traveling for the first time. There was I going to Sydney with my purple backpack and my black sneakers. The plane was so big, and full of strangers, but I was ready and willing to face it all. I met a Brazilian woman on the plane. I do not remember her name, but I do remember she was going to Sydney to help her daughter who was having a tough and painful divorce. We had a long conversation, and she told me to be careful and not fall in love with the first handsome Aussie I meet. I guess she had a point; her little girl has had her heart broken by one of them. Life is always unpredictable and surprising. I hope she and her daughter have found happiness and have solved their issues. Before I decide to travel to Australia, I did some research and found a bubbly Brazilian who lived in Australia. He had a YouTube channel about his life in Aussie. I became addicted to it. He was so cool and happy. I wish I could have his life or at least be his best friend. Well, by the time I was finding my way out of the Sydney airport, I saw a guy giving the warmest hug I have ever seen to a lady. It was a moving scene. You know, airports are so nostalgic with people coming and going. I stared for a while and almost cried when I realized that the guy was the cool youtuber. Yes! That awesome guy! I was like, what? What do I do? Should I go there and say hi? BUT what would I have said? I did not move and I heard a sweet voice saying HELLO HELAINE!

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Sydney - The Arrival

I still remember the day I arrived In Sydney, Australia. I was so scared!
Why is being out of our comfort zone so daunting? It is a mix of emotions such as fear, excitement, happiness, hope, and power. Realizing a dream is incredibly overwhelming, especially when it involves taking a plane and traveling for the first time.
There was I going to Sydney with my purple backpack and my black sneakers. The plane was so big, and full of strangers, but I was ready and willing to face it all.
I met a Brazilian woman on the plane. I do not remember her name, but I do remember she was going to Sydney to help her daughter who was having a tough and painful divorce. We had a long conversation, and she told me to be careful and not fall in love with the first handsome Aussie I meet. I guess she had a point; her little girl had had her heart broken by one of them. Life is always unpredictable and surprising. I hope she and her daughter have found happiness and have solved their issues.
Before I decided to travel to Australia, I did some research and found a bubbly Brazilian who lived in Australia. He had a YouTube channel about his life in Aussie. I became addicted to it. He was so cool and happy. I wish I could have his life or at least be his best friend.
Well, by the time I was finding my way out of the Sydney airport, I saw a guy giving the warmest hug I have ever seen to a lady. It was a moving scene. You know, airports are so nostalgic(old fashioned?) with people coming and going. I stared for a while and almost cried when I realized that the guy was the cool YouTuber. Yes! That awesome guy! I was like, what? What do I do? Should I go there and say hi? BUT what would I have said? I did not move and I heard a sweet voice saying HELLO HELAINE!

(very well written; you just need to look more closely at the difference between 'had' and 'have'.)

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Thanks guys! Obrigada Edire =) aos poucos vou contando e relembrando bons momentos!
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Adorei a sua historia.. =D gostei do jeito que você escreveu ..
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Hello, I like your story and i found it comfortable except for "Why is being out of our comfort zone so daunting?". In my opinion and for the sentence flow i prefer "Why being out of our comfort zone is so daunting?". Wish you have a nice time in Australia and willing to catch you to Australasia.

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