Second entry
Hi, how is going? It's my second entry and I become get used to wrote entry every day. Today I'd like to tell you about my day. Today I get up very early at 6 a.m. I do that because of english. I really want to improve my level of english and I try my best. So, let's continue talk about today. Next, I did physical jerks, meditated, drank coffee, brushed my teeth and started to work. Firstly, I watched an episodes of TED about sex, because I like watching TED, it's gets me interesting idea, helped expand my vocabulary, improve listening skills and at the same time have fun. Secondly, I had a breakfast, then I watched an episodes of The Big Bang Theory and I really enjoyed it. Also I read a book of Stan Lee that called Spider Man. I think it's very enough for today. See you.
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Second entry
Hi, how is it going? It's my second entry and I am getting used to writing an entry every day. Today I'd like to tell you about my day. Today I got up very early at 6 a.m. I do that because of English. I really want to improve my level of English and I try my best. So, let's continue to talk about today. Next, I did physical jerks, meditated, drank coffee, brushed my teeth and started to work. First, I watched an episode of TED about sex because I like watching TED. It shows me interesting ideas, helps me expand my vocabulary, improves my listening skills and have fun at the same time. Second, I had a breakfast. Then I watched an episode of The Big Bang Theory and I really enjoyed it. Also I read a book by Stan Lee that called Spider Man. I think it's very enough for today. See you.Comments: Watch out for verb tense (i.e. present continuous, simple past, etc.) and subject/verb agreement (i.e. it helps, it improves, etc.).
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Second entry
Hi, how's it going? It's my second entry and I want to become used to writing every day. Today I'd like to tell you about my day. Today I got up very early at 6 a.m. I do that because of English. I really want to improve my level of English and I try my best. So, let's continue talk about today. Next, I did physical jerks, meditated, drank coffee, brushed my teeth and started to work. Then, I watched some episodes of TED about sex, because I like watching TED, it's gives me interesting ideas, helps expand my vocabulary, improve listening skills and at the same time I have fun. Secondly, I had a breakfast, then I watched some episodes of The Big Bang Theory and I really enjoyed it. Also I read a book by Stan Lee that called Spider Man. I think that's very enough for today. See you.0
Yeah, I meant work out.
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Instead of "physical jerks", I assume (perhaps incorrectly) you meant that you engaged in physical exercise, which is also referred to as "working out". There is also an Olympic lift called the jerk, in which case I would probably just say "lifted weights."
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