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Hi~My name is amy. My hobby is watching drama. I really love drama. I usually watch korean drama, but i decided watch japenese drama or america drama because i need study english.I think I usually a lot of time spend for watch tv.I know this that is not good hobby,, my another hobby is traval. I love traval.every holiday i go to traval.now i live in china,i gotta live in china until 2017.so i want to go many china city.i think china is so interesting,because china is big,so china has a lot of foods and culture.

-In English, you capitalize "proper nouns," specific names, places, languages... *Amy, Korean, Japanese, American, China, English. We also capitalize the first letter of every sentence.

-"drama" is a kind of TV show. But usually, we don't say, "drama TV shows," we just call them, "dramas." So "drama" is the kind of show, but "dramas" are the shows themselves.

-When America or China is used to describe something, it becomes American or Chinese.

-I think I usually spend a lot of time watching tv. ("watch" needs to be "watching," but it's hard to explain why. For example, both of these are correct: "I run a lot."  "I am often running.").

-... that this is not a good hobby. ("this" and "that" were switched).

-"Travel" is the correct spelling.

-Infinitives have "to" in front of them. For example: "I often travel." and "My hobby is to travel. I love to travel."

-"Every holiday, I travel." The word "travel" means "go somewhere," so in English, you don't need to use the word, "go."

-"I gotta live in China until 2017." There's nothing wrong with this! This is a good use of slang! The grammatically correct version is, "I have to live in China," or, "I have (or I've) got to live in China." If you're doing something professional or formal, you don't want to use "gotta." But if you're just talking to someone, they will be impressed with how well you know the language! It's really better to say, "I've gotta," but people will understand you either way. :)

-Like before, when you use "China" to describe something, it turns into "Chinese." The correct version is: "So I want to go to many cities in China," or, "So I want to go to many Chinese cities."

-Remember to add a space ( ) after every comma (,) and after every sentence.

It looks like you're learning English very well! There are some simple mistakes here, but I understood everything that you said! Keep up the good work! Just remember to put a space after commas and sentences, and to capitalize proper nouns (exact names, places, languages) and to capitalize the first word of every sentence! You're doing great! :)

Here is the full, correct essay:

Hi My name is Amy. My hobby is watching dramas.  I really love dramas. I usually watch Korean dramas, but I decided to watch Japanese dramas or American dramas because I need to study English. I think I usually spend a lot of time watching TV. I know that this is not a good hobby. My other hobby is to travel. I love to travel. Every holiday, I go travel. Now, I live in China. I've gotta live in china until 2017. So i want to go many Chinese cities. I think China is so interesting, because China is big, so China has a lot of food and culture.

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Hi! My name is Amy. My hobby is watching drama. I really love drama.I usually watch Korean drama but I decided watch Japonese drama or American drama because I need to study english. I think I usually spend a lot of time watching tv. I know that is not a good hobby.
My another hobby is travel. I love travel and every holiday I travel, now I'm living in China and I gotta live here until 2017. So, I want to go to many China's cities. I think china is so interesting because China is big, so, China has a lot of foods and culture.