Tsinghua University
Tsinghua University is the best university in China. It's my honor to study here. The campus here is very big and beautiful. And what's more important is that the food here is very delicious. There are over ten canteens and each of them are different from each other. You can eat all kinds of food in Tsinghua, no matter Western-style food or any kind of Chinese food. Besides, you can watch movies and artistic performance, such as opera, ballet, concert and etc. So, living in Tsinghua is very comfortable and fortunate.
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Your English is quite good for a foreign speaker and most of my corrections are regarding not mistakes but style. Basically, nitpicking :)
Tsinghua University
Tsinghua University is the best university in China. It's is my honor to study here ('my honor' is a very literary expression that doesn't go very well with the shortened 'it's' This is not strictly a mistake but looks unnatural). The campus here is very big large and beautiful (it is best to use 'large' when you are speaking about a collection of structures occupying a lot of territory. 'Big' is a very specific word you use when talking about singular objects). And what's more important is that the food here is very delicious. There are over ten canteens and each of them are is different from each other (the only real grammar mistake in the text. 'Each of them' is singular, as it is one object). You can eat all kinds of food in Tsinghua, no matter whether it is Western-style food or any kind of Chinese food ('no matter' requires a conjuction, a noun and a verb after it. You can use 'if' or 'whether' as a conjunction but 'whether' is better for written style). Besides In addition ('in addition' is better for a written text, as 'besides' is better for speech but this is not strictly a mitake), you can watch movies and artistic performance, such as opera, ballet, concert and etc. So, living in Tsinghua is very comfortable and I am fortunate ('living' cannot be fortunate but you can).1
Tsinghua University
Tsinghua University is the best university in China. It's my honor to study here. The campus here is very big and beautiful. And what's more important is that the food here is delicious. There are over ten canteens and each of them is different from the other. You can eat all kinds of food in Tsinghua, no matter if it's Western-style or any kind of Chinese. Also you can watch movies and artistic performances, such as opera, ballet, concerts etc. So, living in Tsinghua is very comfortable and fortunate.Want to progress faster?
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