I appreciate anyone who correct this letter for me. Thank you in advance.
Dear friends
I need this letter to be very formal and polite. I'm so thankful if you correct it for me. I also appreciate you if tell me your opinion about that, especially about the phrase " under your consideration" in this letter.
Dear referee
First of all, I'd like to thank for your useful comments. My response to your comments as follows. I hope the revised manuscript, under your consideration, can be good enough for publication in "... Journal".
Best Regards
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Dear referee
First of all, I'd like to thank for your useful comments. My response to your comments is as follows. I hope the revised manuscript, which is under your consideration, will be good enough for publication in "... Journal".
Best Regards
I chose will instead of can to show the idea of hope. You are willing for it to happen. You are hoping is is going to happen. On the other hand, we use can to talk about what is possible. This altered sentence: 'I hope it is possible the manuscript is good enough...' - doesn't convey exactly what you want to say.
I hope my explanation is clear!
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