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Sentence practice 1. When she tried to take you outside, you didn't even pretend to listen to her. 2. How dare you could make such an immense mistake? The boss asked us to focus so badly. 3. If you didn't come across this notebook, you wouldn't have got the best results. 4. When I was wasting my time, I felt guilty because someone might struggle to keep alive in the hospital or make more living for their family if they should get my time instead. 5. I don't think you should have gone to the diet camp. 6. There is a saying ; The early bird catches a worm. But I don't think the early bird would be always happy because every morning could be the first page of competition for the early bird. 7. Why has she not got rid of all bugs on the tree? I guess she fears of the side effect on the environment thinking she might affect the food chain. 8. I saw the video clip where Conan joked Steven. 9. The short term memories take more storage in your brain than you expect. 10. Journalists didn't make any agreements on how they reveal all of the facts about the serial killer. Some said they should keep his private information behind to respect his basic rights as a human being. Other said that if they opened all the information to the public, it would be helpful to stop innocent people being killed.

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1. When she tried to take you outside, you didn't even pretend to listen to her.  "tried to take you" and "listen" do not match.  how are they related?  "When she asked you to go/come outside, you didn't even pretend to hear her."

2. How dare you could you make such an immense mistake? The boss asked us to focus so badly. You can't ask "badly". You could say, "The boss asked us to focus so vehemently", but that still sounds awkward.  I would say, "The boss told us how important it was to focus."
3. If you didn't hadn't come across this notebook, you wouldn't have gotten the best results. "the best results" is not something we would ever say.  I would say, "you wouldn't have done as well as you did" or "you wouldn't have received a perfect score." 
4. When I was would waste my time, I would feel guilty because someone might have been able to struggle to keep stay alive in the hospital or make more living provide for their family if they should had gotten my time instead.  We would say either "When I would waste" or "While I was wasting".  Your sentence makes it seem like you have only wasted your time 1 time. To be honest, this sentence is quite awkward.
5. I don't think you should have gone to the diet camp. Good
6. There is a saying ; The early bird catches a the worm. But I don't think the early bird would be always be happy because every morning could be the first page of competition for the early bird.  I have no idea what you are saying.  What is "the first page of competition"?
7. Why has she not got rid of all the bugs on the tree? I guess she fears of the side the effect on the environment thinking she might affect the food chain.  Gotten is American English, so "got rid of" might be correct in British English.  
8. I saw the video clip where Conan joked with Steven.  Good
9. The short term memories take up more storage in your brain than you expect. Good.
10. Journalists didn't couldn't make any agree on how they whether to reveal all of the facts about the serial killer. Some said they should keep his information private behind to respect his basic rights as a human being. Other said that if they opened revealed all the information to the public, it would be helpful to in stopping innocent people from being killed.

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Sentence practice

1. When she tried to take you outside, you didn't even pretend to listen to her.
2. How dare you could make could you make such an immense mistake? The boss asked us to focus so badly.
3. If you didn't come across this notebook, you wouldn't have got achieved the best results.
4. When I was wasting my time, I felt guilty because someone might struggle to keep them self alive in the hospital. or make more living for their family if they should get my time instead.  If they had my time they could maybe spend it on more important stuff as family instead of my who's wasting it
5. I don't think you should have gone to the diet camp.
6. There is a saying; The early bird catches a worm. But I don't think the early bird would always be always happy because every morning could be the first page of competition for the early bird. it has to fight to become the first early bird.
7. Why has she not got rid of all of the  bugs on the tree? I guess she fears of the side effect on the environment thinking she might affect the food chain.
8. I saw the video clip where Conan joked with Steven.
9. The short term memories take more storage in your brain than you expect.
10. Journalists didn't make any agreements arguments on how they reveal all of the facts about the serial killer. Some said they should keep his private information behind, to respect his basic rights as a human being. Other said that if they opened all the information to the public, it would be helpful to stop innocent people of being killed.




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