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animal reserve (please, if you do not understand my text , tell me . I have no corrections) I'm froom Mexico, my city is Pachuca, is a small place but is very beatiful. Today my boyfriend and his family going to the new park in the city, It´s fantastic because is a rehabilitation of animals that before live in cautive, in room of one meter. We can see lions very thin and scared, the history about a bear broke my heart, he live in a cirque and was beaten, now he dont has a middle of your mouth, the bear is scared and don't want out. Is fantastic the little zoo in the city, this park have games of childrens and other animals.

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Animal reserve (Please, if you do not understand my text , tell me . I have no corrections)

I'm froom Mexico, my city is  from a city called Pachuca, is a small place but is very beatiful. Today my boyfriend and his family are going to the new park in the city, It´s fantastic because is a rehabilitation centre for of animals that before lived in cages cautive, in room of one meter. We can see The lions are very thin and scared, the history about a bear broke my heart, he lived with  in a circus and was beaten, now he doesn't have a tongue dont has a middle of your mouth, the bear is scared and  won't come out of his cage. don't want out.

Is fantastic The little zoo in the city is fantastic, this park have  there are games for of childrens and other animals.

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