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The stranger. Part 61. "Meanwhile in the other corner of the world". Please, correct my mistakes "Tell me your story. Where were you and what did you do when we were switched?" "This is a long story. Get ready to listen" Lisa said So Lisa began to tell. Listening to it I was afraid. Her story wasn't less horrible than my (one?). For a while she told I thought about different things. I couldn't understand what we did in the past if we were here. Who threw us into the fiction horror story? We were just characters. The most terrible thoughts came to my mind. "What if we are just characters? What if we don't exist?"" I didn't want to think about it. "At the begining I woke in my bed holding a book in my hands. Maybe it was the same book which you had, waking after the switch through the worlds. I didn't focus on it. I was covered by web. A lot of web surrounded me. Then some ghosts came to me. They spelled fearful words flying above the bed. I couldn't move. They wanted to tear a touch between us." "Between who? Who is "us"?" "You and me" "So, what wasnext?" "I don't remember. There were many similar cases. This horror was going on about several days." "They'll be back again. We should be ready"

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The stranger. Part 61. "Meanwhile in the other corner of the world".

"Tell me your story. Where were you and what did you do when we were switched?"

"This is a long story. Get ready to listen", Lisa said.

So Lisa began to tell. After/While listening to it, I was afraid. Her story wasn't less horrible than mine. While she spoke, I thought about different things. I couldn't understand what we did in the past that brought us here. Who threw us into this fictional horror story? We were just characters. The most terrible thoughts came to my mind. "What if we are just characters? What if we don't exist?". I didn't want to think about it. 

"At the beginning, I woke up in my bed holding a book in my hands. Maybe it was the same book which you had, when waking up after the switch through the worlds. I didn't focus on it. I was covered by spider webs. A lot of them surrounded me. Then, some ghosts came to me. They spelled fearful words flying above the bed. I couldn't move. They wanted to tear a touch between us."

"Between who? Who is "us"?"

"You and me."

"So, what happened next?"

"I don't remember. There were many similar cases. This horror went on for about several days."

"They'll be back again. We should be ready."

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