Today
Today is Sunday,no class,no task,i can do everything i want to do…
No alarm clock to rudely awaken me out of a good night's sleep as i get up naturally.i can paly my phone lie in bed,instead of rush to the class and always worry about late.
At12:00,i am very unwilling wake up eventually,because it is a pianful thing to endure hunger.i want to have a big meal,but today is very clod ,think about or forget it.at 14:00,my classmates are come to visit me .a group of men sit at a table play a card game called"Fight the landlord".At17:00,we have dinner together,have fish,tomatoes with eggs,saute vegetable…finally,we chat together in few hours.
Today ,i am very happy .i like this good time and enjoy it.
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Today
Today is Sunday. There is no class, no task and I can do anything I want to do…There is no alarm clock to rudely awaken me out of a good night's sleep as i get up naturally. i can paly(?) my phone lie in bed instead of rush to the class and always worry about being late.
At 12:00, i am very unwilling wake up eventually because it is a painful thing to endure hunger. i want to have a big meal but today is very cloudy and I think about or forget it. at 14:00 my classmates come to visit me . a group of men sit at a table playing a card game called "Fight the landlord". At17:00 we have dinner together with fish, tomatoes with eggs and saute vegetables…finally we chat together for a few hours.
Today , i am very happy . i like this good time and enjoy it.
where 'i' should usually be replaced by 'I' and the first letter after '.' should be CAPITALISED.
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Thank you very much.you understand what i want to say.
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play with the phone = 玩手机
哈哈, a typical task to do when there idle time
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