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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello everyone,I am Yanglingling, English name Sheryl,a Chinese girl with dark hair and dark eyes, I am a quiet girl,love reading,music,travel, and like diy some gift,hand catenary, cross-stitch etc. Why I learn English?I like euramerican country scenery,so someday I well travel to Europe and the United States,to have a taste of different region amorous feelings.And I also like to make new friends.

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Hello everyone, I am Yanglingling, English name Sheryl. I’m a Chinese girl with dark hair and dark eyes, I am a quiet girl who loves reading, music, travel, and likes diy some gifts: hand catenary, cross-stitch etc.

Why am I I learning English? I like Euro-American country scenery, so someday I will travel to Europe and the United States to have a taste of different regions and amorous feelings. And I also like to make new friends.

Hi Sheryl, nice to meet you. If you type using Microsoft Word and use the spell and grammar checks you will make the job of correcting your work easier.

I like your sense of humour: "a Chinese girl with dark hair and dark eyes" Indeed!

I am not sure whether or not you really meant amorous feelings here though. The word amorous is only used for romantic love, so this makes it sound as if you wish to find lovers while you are travelling.

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